Question

目前，越來越多的中學(xué)生請(qǐng)家教，對(duì)于這一現(xiàn)象，存在兩種不同觀點(diǎn)：

有些人認(rèn)為有必要	另一些人認(rèn)為沒有必要
跟教師比自己學(xué)好 可以鞏固課堂所學(xué)內(nèi)容 可以學(xué)到更多的東西	容易養(yǎng)成依賴習(xí)慣 學(xué)生需要時(shí)間休息 許多家教以贏利為目的

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以上提示，以Is a Tutor Necessary？為題，寫一篇110詞左右的短文，反映表中內(nèi)容，并簡要闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
要求：層次清楚，連貫流暢，表達(dá)靈活，不要逐字翻譯。
參考詞匯：家教tutor; 鞏固strengthen
Is a Tutor Necessary?
More and more middle school students are having tutors at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.

Answer 1

Is a Tutor Necessary?
More and more middle school students are having tutors at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.
Some think it necessary . First of all, it’s more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves. Secondly , it can strengthen what I learnt in class. Besides, it can learn a lot more. Others think it unnecessary. For one thing students can easily form the habit of dependence. For another , students need time to relax from time to time. What’s more, the purpose of some family teachers is to make money.
In my opinion, whether a turor is needed just depends. If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject, maybe it’s ok for you to have one. But be sure to choose a good and suitable teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.

解析試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達(dá)：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來. 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用到一些常見的短語First of all首先；form the habit of養(yǎng)成。。的習(xí)慣；In my opinion,在我看來；be interested in對(duì)。。感興趣；a waste of time and money浪費(fèi)時(shí)間與金錢；it’s more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves這個(gè)句子中it做形式主語；it can strengthen what I learnt in class這個(gè)句子中what 引導(dǎo)strengthen的賓語從句；In my opinion, whether a turor is needed just depends這個(gè)句子中what引導(dǎo)主語從句；But be sure to choose a good and suitable teacher, otherwise it would be a waste of time and money.這個(gè)句子中運(yùn)用到祈使句+otherwise +陳述句。
考點(diǎn)： 提綱類作文