Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇題為“Ｍy New English Teacher”的短文，可做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，字?jǐn)?shù)在100詞左右。
（1）李老師留給我的第一印象是年輕，漂亮，熱情，有活力；
（2）她講授清楚,有耐心,并且總是鼓勵(lì)我們，因此同學(xué)們都積極參與英語(yǔ)課堂；
（3）她教我們剛剛兩個(gè)星期，但已經(jīng)成為最受我們歡迎的老師；
(4) 在李老師的幫助下,我們一定能在英語(yǔ)上取得大的進(jìn)步。

Answer 1

My New English Teacher
Mrs. Li has left a very good first impression on me.  She is a beautiful young lady， enthusiastic and full of energy.  Now I know that she is a really wonderful teacher.  She explains everything clearly and is very patient with us.  She always encourages us and avoids making us feel embarrassed even when we make mistakes, so every student is very active in her class.
So far,  Mrs. Li has been teaching us for only two weeks, but she has already become the most popular teacher with all of the students in our class! I am sure that we are going to learn a lot with Mrs. Li teaching us.

解析試題分析：本文比較簡(jiǎn)單。是一篇人物傳記。李老師的所有信息都已經(jīng)給了出來，考生只需要翻譯即可，在寫作的時(shí)候，不要總是使用陳述句，可以變換使用倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句，祈使句等，使文章充滿變化。在選詞的時(shí)候也要注意選用一些相對(duì)有難度的詞來提升文章的層次。也要使用合適的連接詞如so far等讓各個(gè)要點(diǎn)成為整體。
考點(diǎn)：考查人物傳記類短文寫作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文是一篇人物傳記，要求考生以時(shí)間為順序，描寫出老師的所有信息。要特別注意把所有的要點(diǎn)都包括在內(nèi)，不能有遺漏，注意使用合適的連接詞和高級(jí)詞匯或者句型來連接全文。