Question

每年的4月23日是“世界讀書日”。盡管在科技日益發(fā)達的今天，人們獲取知識與信息的途徑有很多，我們還是鼓勵更多的人閱讀。 請以Reading—A Bright Way to A Better life為題寫一篇英語作文，要點包括下表中的信息�！　�

閱讀的好處	操作靈活，便于獲取信息；擴大視野，客觀認識自然和社會。
	提升自身素養(yǎng)，利于人際交流；豐富生活，帶來歡樂
	更好生存的手段
閱讀需要	選擇內(nèi)容
	良好習慣
	長期堅持
考生您	喜歡閱讀的內(nèi)容（概括）……
	堅持閱讀的體會…

注意：1. 詞數(shù)150左右。2. 不要純粹照點翻譯。3. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名。
Reading—A Bright Way to A Better life
Knowledge may be acquired through many ways, the best of which is reading. In the age of high technology, reading deserves to be paid attention to.
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Answer 1

Reading—A Bright Way to A Better life
Knowledge may be acquired through many ways, the best of which is reading. In the age of high technology, reading deserves to be paid attention to.
To begin with, it is the most flexible way of getting information. Many people think it not only helps them better understand society as well as nature, but also broaden their horizon. Additionally, reading, to some degree, is of great benefit to interpersonal communication apart from self-improvement. It can also enrich our life and bring people pleasure. What’s more, reading is also regarded by many as a means of better survival.
Books are to mind what food is to body. However, not every book is worthy of being read. Some may mislead readers. So keep in mind that choosing a good book is like making a good friend. Besides, reading is supposed to be done in a proper period of time, for example, in our spare time, thus not disturbing our work or study. As long as we insist on reading, we can get improved gradually.
Personally, I appreciate reading classical literature in my spare time, which provides me with a thorough understanding of life and society. Through practicing reading between the lines and beyond the lines, I find my comprehension ability stably improved. Perhaps in the near future, I’m not merely a reader but also a writer.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：這是提綱式作文，要點已經(jīng)給出，而且很詳細，考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，根據(jù)所給要點，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
【亮點說明】本篇范文行文流暢，好的詞組隨處可見：deserves to be paid attention to值得被注意，. of great benefit to 對…很有益，apart from/as well as 除了， to some degree到某個程度，be worthy of being read.值得被讀， keep in mind記住，be supposed to應(yīng)該，還出現(xiàn)了非謂語動詞的用法，如：reading ，improved以.及it做形式主語/賓語的句式為文章增加了亮點。長短句穿插使用，錯落有致，讀起來自然流暢，Knowledge may be acquired through many ways, the best of which is reading這句話用了定語從句，. Books are to mind what food is to body.這句話用了高級句型， I appreciate reading classical literature in my spare time, which provides me with a thorough understanding of life and society.這句話用了非限制性定語從句。關(guān)聯(lián)詞To begin with, . Additionally, What’s more, Besides,的使用使文章更加連貫。