Question

最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查表明如今的中國(guó)青年的人生目標(biāo)比過(guò)去要顯得多元化。這種選擇的變化表明社會(huì)在進(jìn)步，人們的生活目標(biāo)較以前更為實(shí)際。

比例	目標(biāo)	手段
53.5%	掙錢(qián)給自己買(mǎi)一房一車(chē)	71.9%的人說(shuō)將努力拼搏以實(shí)現(xiàn)人生的目標(biāo)
44%	提高生活質(zhì)量
43.7%	成為富人
23.9%	找一份好工作

【參考詞匯】  多元化（的）：diversified    調(diào)查對(duì)象：respondent
【寫(xiě)作要求】
1. 以上述信息為材料寫(xiě)一段短文�？梢愿鶕�(jù)實(shí)際適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 中心突出，語(yǔ)意連貫，層次清晰．書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
3. 不少于100字，
4. 標(biāo)題不計(jì)入字?jǐn)?shù)。

Answer 1

One possible version：
Chinese Young People's Life Goals Today
A recent survey shows that in today's society, Chinese young people's life goals have become more diversified than before. When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves. In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be a rich person while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job. As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams. The survey shows that the society is making progress and people's life goals have become more practical.

試題分析：本文要求根據(jù)圖表內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇作文。在寫(xiě)作前同學(xué)們要仔細(xì)分析圖表，根據(jù)圖表所示，文章要寫(xiě)明人們四種不同的目標(biāo)以及所占的比例和實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)的途徑手段。在寫(xiě)調(diào)查報(bào)告時(shí)一般首先寫(xiě)明調(diào)查的結(jié)果，然后再詳細(xì)介紹各種不同的情況，最后寫(xiě)明這種現(xiàn)象所反映的問(wèn)題，即：這種選擇的變化表明社會(huì)在進(jìn)步，人們的生活目標(biāo)較以前更為實(shí)際。此外，反應(yīng)社會(huì)現(xiàn)象的調(diào)查報(bào)告一般使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，而且要客觀真實(shí)地反映圖表所給信息。最后，還要注意語(yǔ)言的流暢通順，要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，補(bǔ)充文章細(xì)節(jié)以使文章內(nèi)容豐滿。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章總共分為三個(gè)層次，首先開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山提出調(diào)查結(jié)果Chinese young people's life goals have become more diversified than before，然后介紹了四種不同情況以及各自所占的比例，最后總結(jié)這種變化的實(shí)質(zhì)，這使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明。盡管文章短小，但是表達(dá)方式卻是一大亮點(diǎn)，比如涵蓋信息量較大的復(fù)合句When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves.和In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be a rich person while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.這充分顯示了作者語(yǔ)言的把控力。此外In addition to 、As for等短語(yǔ)也有效地連接了上下文，使文章語(yǔ)義連貫，自然流暢。