Question

20．假如你是李華．你的美國(guó)朋友 Lucy 因家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)困難準(zhǔn)備輟學(xué)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下 提示要點(diǎn)，給她寫封信，勸她繼續(xù)上學(xué)．
1．學(xué)習(xí)的重要性；2．如何面對(duì)目前的困難．
注意：1．詞數(shù) 100 左右；2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．信的開頭和 結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Lucy，
I am sorry to hear that you have decided to drop out of school（輟學(xué)）．
I am writing to persuade you not to do that and hope you can continue your studies．（高分句型一）The reasons are as follows．
First of all，as a student，our studies must come first．To receive education at school at present will have a long-lasting influence on our future．Second，all of us will meet with difficulties in our lives and thus we must accept the challenges and try to overcome them．（高分句型二）Third，there are many ways to help you get through the present difficult situation．For example，you can apply for student loans or take part-time jobs．
There is no doubt that I will try my best to help you．（高分句型三）In short，I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision．
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華．你的美國(guó)朋友 Lucy 因家庭經(jīng)濟(jì)困難準(zhǔn)備輟學(xué)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下 提示要點(diǎn)，給她寫封信，勸她繼續(xù)上學(xué)，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：學(xué)習(xí)的重要性；如何面對(duì)目前的困難．  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：drop out of school輟學(xué)；First of all首先；Second其次；Third第三；get through經(jīng)歷；There is no doubt that…毫無疑問；In short總之；Look forward to盼望；
I am writing to persuade you not to do that and hope you can continue your studies．（高分句型一）
Second，all of us will meet with difficulties in our lives and thus we must accept the challenges and try to overcome them．（高分句型二）
There is no doubt that I will try my best to help you．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Lucy，
       I am sorry to hear that you have decided to drop out of school．I am writing to persuade you not to do that and hope you can continue your studies．（高分句型一）The reasons are as follows．
       First of all，as a student，our studies must come first．To receive education at school at present will have a long-lasting influence on our future．Second，all of us will meet with difficulties in our lives and thus we must accept the challenges and try to overcome them．（高分句型二）Third，there are many ways to help you get through the present difficult situation．For example，you can apply for student loans or take part-time jobs． 
       There is no doubt that I will try my best to help you．（高分句型三）In short，I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final decision．
       Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．