15.假定你是李華,剛獲得全校英語(yǔ)演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng).請(qǐng)給你的外教Jack寫(xiě)一封英語(yǔ)感謝信,要點(diǎn)如下:
1.表示感謝;
2.回顧Jack對(duì)你的幫助和指導(dǎo);
3.寶貴經(jīng)驗(yàn).
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.
Dear Jack,
I'm writing to tell you good news that I have won the first prize in our school's English Speech Contest.(高分句型一)I really appreciate your guidance and great help.
Looking back on the process of preparing for the contest,I'll never forget the great progress I made with your help.(高分句型二)Not only did you correct the mistakes in my pronunciation,you also recommended wonderful English speech videos for me to imitate.What's more,it was your constant encouragement that inspired me to be confident,which played a vital role in winning the contest.(高分句型三)
Through the contest,I've realized that only when we set a goal and work hard towards it can we gain success in the end.
Many thanks again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文,根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華,剛獲得全校英語(yǔ)演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng).請(qǐng)給你的外教Jack寫(xiě)一封英語(yǔ)感謝信,寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:表示感謝;回顧Jack對(duì)你的幫助和指導(dǎo);寶貴經(jīng)驗(yàn). 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):English Speech Contest英語(yǔ)演講比賽;Look back on回顧;Not only,(but)also 不僅,而且;What's more而且;
I'm writing to tell you good news that I have won the first prize in our school's English Speech Contest.(高分句型一)
Looking back on the process of preparing for the contest,I'll never forget the great progress I made with your help.(高分句型二)
What's more,it was your constant encouragement that inspired me to be confident,which played a vital role in winning the contest.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Jack,
      I'm writing to tell you good news that I have won the first prize in our school's English Speech Contest.(高分句型一)I really appreciate your guidance and great help.
      Looking back on the process of preparing for the contest,I'll never forget the great progress I made with your help.(高分句型二)Not only did you correct the mistakes in my pronunciation,you also recommended wonderful English speech videos for me to imitate.What's more,it was your constant encouragement that inspired me to be confident,which played a vital role in winning the contest.(高分句型三)
      Through the contest,I've realized that only when we set a goal and work hard towards it can we gain success in the end.
      Many thanks again.
                                                                                                                                                                                        Yours sincerely,
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀(guān)性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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