Question

假定你是李華。請你給美國的朋友Tom寫封信，告訴他你將去他所在的城市度假，帶去他想要的那幅中國絲綢，同時詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需要說明：
航班號：CA991
到達(dá)：8月16日上午11:30
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已為你寫好。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing?
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
Looking forward to your reply.

Answer 1

 
One possible version:
Peter，
How are you going ?
I’m writing to tell you that I’m going to your city for a holiday, and I have brought you the Chinese sick you have asked for before.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet me at the airport and take me to my hotel since this is the first time that I have visited America .
My flight number is CA991 and it will arrive at 11:30 am,August16, thank you in advance.

試題解析：從文章體裁分析，本文是一篇記敘文的寫作，寫的是作者要去朋友的城市度假，因?yàn)榈谝淮稳ニ�以需要朋友接機(jī)。
寫信是中學(xué)生最熟悉的事，這種形式的寫作貼近學(xué)生生活，使他們有話可說。寫作時應(yīng)注意下面幾點(diǎn)：
(1)注意人稱，應(yīng)該用第一人稱的形式給筆友Tom寫信。
(2)注意時態(tài)的正確使用：用一般將來時和一般現(xiàn)在時。
(3)要點(diǎn)全面、層次清楚、語言簡練。
(4)注意恰當(dāng)使用連接詞，使各個要點(diǎn)間邏輯連貫、行文通順。
(5)適當(dāng)使用一些高級句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】
文章使用了非常好的短語和句子給文章增色，如The Would you please meet me at the airport（would you please +do sth ?請你….好嗎?）, this is the first time that I have visited America .(this is the first time +主語 +have done，這是。。。第一次做某事) I have brought you the Chinese sick you have asked for before.（定語從句），in advance 提前，并且主語了句子的銜接如： also 等。