【題目】請(qǐng)以"One person I’m grateful to"為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇100—120個(gè)詞的短文，記述一個(gè)你認(rèn)為值得感謝的人。要求如下：

1. 內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例;

2. 簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明值得感謝的原因或從中得到的啟示；

3. 文中不得透漏個(gè)人信息。

注意：文章的標(biāo)題已給出（不計(jì)詞數(shù)）。

One Person I’m Grateful to

【答案】

We are supposed to be grateful to people who are always there with us because they are the charming gardeners who make our souls blossom.

My English teacher is such a great soul, to whom I owe many thanks. During the previous study, my biggest flaw must come to carelessness, which worried me a lot. To make matters worse, I was too anxious to seek the fundamental reason for my failure. I just dedicated myself to huge amounts of practice, regardless of repeated mistakes. Fortunately, my teacher noticed it and offered to have a long talk with me. Having been persuaded to change my attitude, I finally got the right way to rid myself of carelessness and gained confidence as well.

I am grateful to my English teacher for all the support he has given me, which has made me stronger and a better person

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇說(shuō)明文寫(xiě)作，說(shuō)明的對(duì)象是一個(gè)自己很感激的人。文章的主要內(nèi)容提出中已經(jīng)說(shuō)明，記敘一個(gè)生活事例，說(shuō)明感謝的原因和從中得到的啟示。因此敘述的時(shí)間要內(nèi)容真實(shí)，感情飽滿真切。時(shí)態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯提升作文檔次�！玖咙c(diǎn)說(shuō)明】第一段第一句話We are supposed to be grateful to people who are always there with us使用who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句；第二自然段第一句話My English teacher is such a great soul, to whom I owe many thanks.再次使用定語(yǔ)從句；第二句話my biggest flaw must come to carelessness, which worried me a lot.使用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；最后自然段I am grateful to my English teacher for all the support he has given me, which has made me stronger and a better person使用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。文章在短語(yǔ)運(yùn)用上，靈活多變，To make matters worse使用動(dòng)詞不定式表示狀語(yǔ)；regardless of repeated mistakes.介詞短語(yǔ)表示狀語(yǔ)；Having been persuaded to change my attitude使用現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)表示狀語(yǔ)；I was too anxious to seek the fundamental reason for my failure.，使用too．．．to．．．太．．．而不能．．．。I just dedicated myself to huge amounts of practice中，使用了dedicate myself to投身于．．．。在詞匯運(yùn)用上，選用一些高級(jí)詞匯，提升文章的表達(dá)和魅力。第一自然段使用charming gardeners迷人的園丁，寫(xiě)出了教師職業(yè)的高尚，和老師靈魂的高尚，真實(shí)清晰地表達(dá)了作者對(duì)于老師的感激之情。make our souls blossom的表達(dá)分詞生動(dòng)，形象地說(shuō)明了老師對(duì)我們心靈的培育，教導(dǎo)我們成長(zhǎng)。

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