Question

請(qǐng)你給《中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)》寫一份稿件，談?wù)勀壳案鞔蟪鞘杏捎谄�車保有量的不斷增長(zhǎng)，造成交通堵塞，交通事故直線上升，城市空氣質(zhì)量下降等多個(gè)問題，并提出你個(gè)人的解決問題的辦法（如綠色出行，拼車等），希望市民能共同努力，創(chuàng)造一個(gè)良好的生活環(huán)境。
要求：
1: 不要逐字逐句翻譯。
2：語(yǔ)句要連貫通順。
3：字?jǐn)?shù)在120左右。

Answer 1

Cars do really bring convenience. Distance is no longer a big problem for journey with the invention.
As the government encourages the Automobile industry, the number of cars in most cities has been increasing for several years. According to a data from the police, in Shanghai nearly every three persons own a car. As a result, traffic jam has become a severe problem in those major cities, especially when people are on the way to or back from work. This has directly and strongly affected people’s daily life and work. Meanwhile, the traffic accidents have caught people’s eyes. And what is even worse, along with the accidents come the pollution and noise.
Actually, living in a green way is practical. Either taking a bus or subway or carpooling is a good way to reduce the number of cars on the road. Besides, cycling can replace driving if our house is not so far from where we work. It may take a bit longer but saves energy, avoids traffic jam and improves our health. If possible, we can even walk. In one word, solutions are more than problems.
City is a place where people gather. To solve a problem can never depend on one person. However difficult the problem may be, it will certainly become easy when we build a shared vision.

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