11.今天是七月八日,下午班級(jí)召開(kāi)了以"我的夢(mèng)想"為主題的班會(huì)活動(dòng),每位同學(xué)都暢所欲言,特別是介紹了自己的職業(yè)方面的夢(mèng)想.請(qǐng)寫一篇日記,記述班會(huì)情況及自己的感受.
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):1.談?wù)勛约郝殬I(yè)方面的夢(mèng)想;
2.介紹有這個(gè)夢(mèng)想的原因;
3.闡述如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想.
注意:1.文章開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).
2.詞數(shù)要求:100字.
July 8th                                                                     Sunny
All the students talked about their own dreamed jobs in the future in this class-meeting.                         

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息今天是七月八日,下午班級(jí)召開(kāi)了以"我的夢(mèng)想"為主題的班會(huì)活動(dòng),每位同學(xué)都暢所欲言,特別是介紹了自己的職業(yè)方面的夢(mèng)想.請(qǐng)寫一篇日記,記述班會(huì)情況及自己的感受.寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn):談?wù)勛约郝殬I(yè)方面的夢(mèng)想;介紹有這個(gè)夢(mèng)想的原因;闡述如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的夢(mèng)想.2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫.本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明:come true 實(shí)現(xiàn);sooner or later遲早;With the help of 在…的幫助之下;in the future在未來(lái);Anyhow無(wú)論如何;meanwhile同時(shí);Hopefully充滿希望的是;
When I was in Grade Seven,I was sick and often went to see doctors.(高分句型一)
With the help of them,I was getting better.(高分句型二)
Anyhow,this class-meeting was indeed meaningful,meanwhile,I know that the dream I have calls for my efforts.(高分句型三)

解答 July 8th       Sunny
      All the students talked about their own dreamed jobs in the future in this class-meeting.We all believe that our dreams will come true sooner or later.
      I also talked about my own dream:to be a doctor.And the reasons are as follows.When I was in Grade Seven,I was sick and often went to see doctors.(高分句型一)The doctors were very friendly and they often cheered me up.With the help of them,I was getting better.(高分句型二)Now I'm very healthy.Since then I have hoped to become a doctor.How will I make my dream come true?I will study hard to get good grades.I'll read more books about medicine.I believe I'll be a good doctor in the future.
      Anyhow,this class-meeting was indeed meaningful,meanwhile,I know that the dream I have calls for my efforts.(高分句型三)Hopefully,I can make it.

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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