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3．假定你是李華，你所在的"中國剪紙文化的傳承和發(fā)展（inheritance and development of Chinese Paper-cutting）"課題研究小組剛剛獲得今年的"中國大智匯創(chuàng)新研究挑戰(zhàn)賽（China Thinks Big 2016）"二等獎．請你寫信給你的外籍教師史密斯先生，感謝他一直以來對你們的支持與幫助．要點如下：
1．比賽時間：4月18-20日；
2．比賽地點：哈佛（Harvard）上海中心；
3．課題與收獲；
4．感謝與祝愿．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好．
Dear Mr．Smith，
I am Li Hua，a student of yours．
I'm writing to share with you the good news that our research group has justwon the second prize in China Thinks Big 2016．（高分句型一）It was recently held in Harvard Shanghai Center，from April 18 to20．Here could I give a very big"Thank you"for your continuous help and encouragement？
In fact，the research on the Inheritance and Development ofChinese Paper-cutting has benefited us a lot．Itenables us to know more about our traditional cultures．It also increases our sense ofpride to do more to promoteits inheritance and development．We do hope you can give us further instructions and wish you all the best!（高分句型二）
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)合理，全文分成兩段，很好地完成了文字提示部分的所有任務．而且本文英語思維體現(xiàn)得很好，遣詞造句很合理．句式也富有變化，時態(tài)和人稱使用準確無誤，第一段使用一般過去時介紹比賽情況，第二段使用一般現(xiàn)在時敘述個人收獲并表示感謝和祝愿．
文章中使用了強調(diào)句：We do hope you can give us further instructions and wish you all the best!同位語從句I'm writing to share with you the good news that our research group has just won the second prize in China Thinks Big 2016．這些句式的使用讓文章富有變化．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：
I'm writing to share with you the good news that our research group has just won the second prize in China Thinks Big 2016．（高分句型一）
We do hope you can give us further instructions and wish you all the best!（高分句型二）

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
      I am Li Hua，a student of yours．I'm writing to share with you the good news that our research group has just won the second prize in China Thinks Big 2016．（高分句型一）It was recently held in Harvard Shanghai Center，from April 18 to 20．Here could I give a very big"Thank you"for your continuous help and encouragement？
      In fact，the research on the Inheritance and Development of Chinese Paper-cutting has benefited us a lot．It enables us to know more about our traditional cultures．It also increases our sense of pride to do more to promote its inheritance and development．We do hope you can give us further instructions and wish you all the best!（高分句型二）
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．