Question

Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to tell you that I’m interesting in the summer camp in Australia and I hope I can be become a member.
My name is Li Nan, a 18-year-old girl from Shaanxi, China, but I’m a Senior One student. As a student, I has learned English for 8 year. And I can communicate with foreigners in English free. As you know, I am a senior student now, so I know China well. I can introduced Chinese culture to foreign friends.
I hope I can accepted. I’m looking forward to receive your reply as soon as possible.
Yours 
Li Nan

Answer 1

【小題1】interesting →interested
【小題2】去掉be 或become
【小題3】a →an
【小題4】but →and
【小題5】has →have
【小題6】year →years
【小題7】free →freely
【小題8】introduced →introduce
【小題9】accepted →be accepted
【小題10】receive →receiving

解析試題分析：本文是一封書信，敘述了作者想要參加一個(gè)去澳大利亞的夏令營的事情。信中介紹了自己的優(yōu)勢—英語不錯(cuò)，可以向外國朋友介紹中國文化，希望盡快收到答復(fù)。
【小題1】be interested in 對(duì)……感興趣，主語通常指人，句中是說作者對(duì)……感興趣。
【小題2】be和become重復(fù)，所以要去掉一個(gè)。
【小題3】在元音音素前要用不定冠詞an。
【小題4】在本句中前后是并列關(guān)系要用and。
【小題5】has只用在第三人稱單數(shù)后面，句中主語是I，故has →have。
【小題6】year前是大于一的數(shù)字，year要用復(fù)數(shù)，year →years。
【小題7】英語中要用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，因此本句中free →freely。
【小題8】句中can是情態(tài)動(dòng)詞“能”，后接動(dòng)詞原形，故introduced →introduce。
【小題9】由上下文可知，作者希望被接受，要用被動(dòng)語態(tài)，情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can后接動(dòng)詞原形，因此用助動(dòng)詞be。
【小題10】look forward to后接V-ing形式，因此receive →receiving。
考點(diǎn)：短文改錯(cuò)。