Question

18．假定你是李華，英國一個學生代表團將來你校進行訪問，你們計劃舉辦一個聯(lián)歡會（a get together），請向對方負責人Jack寫信，告知聯(lián)歡會活動安排，并征求對方意見．聯(lián)歡會活動安排如下：
（1）中國學生表演節(jié)目
（2）英國學生表演節(jié)目
（3）中英兩國學生共同參與一個節(jié)目或活動．（詢問有何建議）
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jack，
We feel very honored  that we will have you here as our guestsNow I'd like to inform you of some of our arrangements for your visit and ask for your opinions of them．
We are going to have a get together at which performances will be given．（高分句型一）Of course，we Chinese students will perform some Chinese dances and music，but we don't think the get-together will be complete without your taking part．（高分句型二）So，would you mind giving some performances，too？Further more．we think there should be a performance or an activity in which both Chinese students and British students will act together．（高分句型三）What do you think of the idea？I wonder if you could make some suggestions．
I'm looking forward to your early reply．Yours，
Li  Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息向對方負責人Jack寫信，告知聯(lián)歡會活動安排，并征求對方意見，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：（1）中國學生表演節(jié)目（2）英國學生表演節(jié)目（3）中英兩國學生共同參與一個節(jié)目或活動．（詢問有何建議）2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：
We are going to have a get together at which performances will be given．（高分句型一）句中帶有介詞+which引導的定語從句
Of course，we Chinese students will perform some Chinese dances and music，but we don't think the get-together will be complete without your taking part．（高分句型二）句中Chinese students作we的同位語
Further more．we think there should be a performance or an activity in which both Chinese students and British students will act together．（高分句型三）句中帶有介詞+which引導的定語從句

解答 Dear Jack，
     We feel very honored that we will have you here as our guests．Now I'd like to inform you of some of our arrangements for your visit and ask for your opinions of them．
      We are going to have a get together at which performances will be given．（高分句型一）Of course，we Chinese students will perform some Chinese dances and music，but we don't think the get-together will be complete without your taking part．（高分句型二）So，would you mind giving some performances，too？Further more．we think there should be a performance or an activity in which both Chinese students and British students will act together．（高分句型三）What do you think of the idea？I wonder if you could make some suggestions．
      I'm looking forward to your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                             Li  Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．