Question

15．你是張偉的好朋友John，張偉即將參加學校的英語朗誦比賽，向你求助，請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他寫一封建議信．
比賽之前：認真準備：如平時可對著鏡子練習；用語簡練，使評委印象深刻．
比賽時：保持微笑；忘詞時不緊張，繼續(xù)演講．
寫作內(nèi)容：
1．說明回信的意圖；
2．向張偉提出建議；
3．預祝張偉比賽成功．
Dear Zhangwei，
…
Yours，
John．

Answer 1

分析 寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫．要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系．根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩．
【亮點說明】You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you．運用了并列句，同時也使用了限制性定語從句；In my opinion，you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicingbefore a mirror．本句運用了含情態(tài)動詞的被動語態(tài)；Besides，you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges．目的狀語從句運用的恰到好處；When you are giving the speech，remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words，don't be panic and just continue your speech，because no one will notice it．時間狀語從句，讓步狀語從句，原因狀語從句和祈使句完美結合．

解答 Dear Zhangwei，
You have told me that you are very nervous about the coming speech contest and I will try to make some suggestions which I hope can help you．（高分句型） In my opinion，you should get well prepared before the speech contest by practicing before a mirror．（高分句型）
Besides，you had better use a brief and concise language in your speech so that you can leave a deep impression on the judges．（高分句型） When you are giving the speech，remember to keep smile and even if you forget your words，don't be panic and just continue your speech，because no one will notice it．Wish you success in the speech．
Yours，
John

點評 提綱類寫作的文章較開放式的文體，比較好寫．學生在寫作的過程中，首先思路要清晰，要對所表達的句子通順的說出來，遇到不會的要學會替換所用語，來達到同樣的意思．在每一篇作文中，對于表達觀點的句子，都要用上起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞來加強文章的層次感，適當運用俗語，運用平時常用的句式來使文章富有變化，表達地道得體．