假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。
Dear Smith,
I have a good news for you. All senior three students will take part in a mountain- climbing activity in May 18th, which is intending to help reduce our pressure from study. So I’m written to invite you to go along.
We plan to gather at the school gate at 8:20, weather permitting. Then they will set off at 8:30, heading for the mountains nearby on feet. After having a good time, we are supposed to go back school for lunch at about 12.
The suggestions are as following. You’d better wear strong and comfortably shoes so that you can enjoy the trip. A bottle of water and some snacks are also necessary in climbing. In addition, you can take with you a camera to get some photos take.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Yan.


【小題1】第一句去掉a
【小題2】in May18th改成on May 18th
【小題3】intending改成intended
【小題4】written 改成writing
【小題5】第五句they或we
【小題6】feet改成foot
【小題7】go back school改成go back to school
【小題8】following改成followed
【小題9】comfortably改成comfortable
【小題10】take改成taken

解析【小題1】news是不可數(shù)名詞前面不用冠詞a。   
【小題2】具體到某一天介詞用on。
【小題3】短語(yǔ)be intended to do 打算干某事
【小題4】“寫信”用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)表達(dá)，所以用writing。
【小題5】全文主語(yǔ)是we。
【小題6】“步行”用“on foot”表示，不用復(fù)數(shù)形式。
【小題7】“回到學(xué)�！笔恰癵o back to school”。
【小題8】“建議如下”表達(dá)為“The suggestions are as follows”。
【小題9】修飾名詞shoes用形容詞comfortable。
【小題10】get sth done“使某事被做”所以take用過去分詞taken。
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