假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤, 每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處, 多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
When I am a child, I always wished to become an adult so that I could do all what I liked. I wanted to have more space where I was able to follow my own heart without follow my parents’ instructions. As time going by, I have grown up gradually, but I find things are quite different from what I expect. I do have the free to do more things alone. Moreover, I have to take on much responsibilities. I have to take the charge of my life and face challenges bravely. Now I am determined to work hardly and go to college so that I can have a bright future.


【小題1】am改為was
【小題2】去掉all或what改為that
【小題3】follow改為following
【小題4】As改為With或going改為went
【小題5】expect改為expected
【小題6】free改為freedom
【小題7】Moreover改為 However
【小題8】much改為more
【小題9】去掉the
【小題10】hardly改為hard

解析試題分析：
【小題1】表示過去的事情，故用一般過去時(shí)，所以am改為was。
【小題2】這里含有一個(gè)定語從句，關(guān)系詞指物，在定語從句中作賓語，故用關(guān)系代詞that，所以去掉all或what改為that。
【小題3】without是介詞，介詞之后要用動(dòng)詞的-ing形式，所以follow改為following。
【小題4】as time went by是固定用法，意思是隨著時(shí)間的流逝。
【小題5】“我期待的事情”是發(fā)生在過去的事情，故用一般過去時(shí)。
【小題6】作賓語，故用名詞形式，所以free改為freedom。
【小題7】句意：我確實(shí)有自由獨(dú)自做更多事。然而，我必須承擔(dān)更多的責(zé)任。所以Moreover改為 However。
【小題8】這里表示承擔(dān)更多的責(zé)任，所以much改為more。
【小題9】take charge of是固定句型，意思是掌管。所以去掉the。
【小題10】句意：現(xiàn)在，為了有一個(gè)光明的未來，我決定好好學(xué)習(xí)。Hardly意思是幾乎不，hard意思是努力的，所以hardly改為hard。
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