Question

15．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
請(qǐng)簡(jiǎn)要描述下面兩幅圖片內(nèi)容，并簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勀愕母邢耄?br />
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Answer 1

分析 本書面表達(dá)是一篇圖畫類的寫作，要求考生按圖片描寫交通工具的空氣污染的危害．要仔細(xì)觀察分析圖畫的畫面，按照?qǐng)D意寫作．并且寫作時(shí)注意句子的銜接，適當(dāng)使用連詞．同時(shí)考生還要注意的是在寫作過程中所運(yùn)用的時(shí)態(tài)要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．除此以外，要注意寫作過程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語(yǔ)和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．
重要短語(yǔ)：
 traffic jams 交通堵塞，as our individuals，就我們個(gè)人來(lái)說，take some measures to do，采取措施做，
高分句子：
With the fast development of human society and the improvement of life standard，private car has become more and more common in our country，especially in cities．With加短語(yǔ)做伴隨狀語(yǔ)，是文章常用的開頭句式．

解答 With the fast development of human society and the improvement of life standard，private car has become more and more common in our country，especially in cities．（高分句型）It brings some benefit for us but also causes many problems at the same time．（提出話題）
    As the picture shows，the private car has caused many problems as well．Firstly，the environment would be heavily polluted if the number of private cars rises too quickly．The exhaust gas from cars pollutes the air and causes some serious problems to human health．Moreover，too many private cars will cause traffic jams instead of bringing convenience．Finally，the increase of traffic accidents has threatened the safety o f people's life． So a child says，don't kill me by vehicle's smoke noisy and heat．（描述圖片）
      As far as I am concerned，as our individuals，we should prefer to choose the public transportations when we go out．And for our government，they should take some measures to limit the increasing number of private cars．（提出自己看法）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 在完成圖表作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣才可以更好的駕馭．同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體．