Question

15．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
請簡要描述下面兩幅圖片內(nèi)容，并簡要談談你的感想．

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Answer 1

分析 本書面表達是一篇圖畫類的寫作，要求考生按圖片描寫交通工具的空氣污染的危害．要仔細觀察分析圖畫的畫面，按照圖意寫作．并且寫作時注意句子的銜接，適當使用連詞．同時考生還要注意的是在寫作過程中所運用的時態(tài)要以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．除此以外，要注意寫作過程中注意使用平時學到的短語和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性．
重要短語：
 traffic jams 交通堵塞，as our individuals，就我們個人來說，take some measures to do，采取措施做，
高分句子：
With the fast development of human society and the improvement of life standard，private car has become more and more common in our country，especially in cities．With加短語做伴隨狀語，是文章常用的開頭句式．

解答 With the fast development of human society and the improvement of life standard，private car has become more and more common in our country，especially in cities．（高分句型）It brings some benefit for us but also causes many problems at the same time．（提出話題）
    As the picture shows，the private car has caused many problems as well．Firstly，the environment would be heavily polluted if the number of private cars rises too quickly．The exhaust gas from cars pollutes the air and causes some serious problems to human health．Moreover，too many private cars will cause traffic jams instead of bringing convenience．Finally，the increase of traffic accidents has threatened the safety o f people's life． So a child says，don't kill me by vehicle's smoke noisy and heat．（描述圖片）
      As far as I am concerned，as our individuals，we should prefer to choose the public transportations when we go out．And for our government，they should take some measures to limit the increasing number of private cars．（提出自己看法）

點評 在完成圖表作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體．