Question

12．假設(shè)你是李明，你的英國(guó)朋友Tom來(lái)信關(guān)心你參加期中考試的情況，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)回信告知．
1．考試準(zhǔn)備情況
2．考試時(shí)的狀態(tài)
3．對(duì)試題的感受
4．可能的考試結(jié)果
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100字左右
2．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好
3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章連貫
參考詞匯：期中考試  mid-term examination
Dear Tom，
Thank you for your concern．

Answer 1

分析 假設(shè)你是李明，你的英國(guó)朋友Tom來(lái)信關(guān)心你參加期中考試的情況，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)回信告知．1．考試準(zhǔn)備情況；2．考試時(shí)的狀態(tài)；3．對(duì)試題的感受；4．可能的考試結(jié)果．要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，把漢語(yǔ)翻譯成通順的英語(yǔ)句子，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，寫作時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩，注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)在100詞左右，不要太多或太少．書信的開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】It is now common knowledge that the College Entrance Examination is held on June 6 and 7 annually，as a national policy，during which，seven different subjects are tested depending on what you learn，science or art．句中包含了that引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句，during which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句和what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句；For me，Chinese，Math，English，Politics，History and Geography are included．此句中運(yùn)用了被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；I spent a whole year reviewing all the subjects carefully until I thought I was fully prepared．在句中使用了until引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)；Frankly speaking，the papers were （are） not so hard for me despite some difficulty．句中運(yùn)用了獨(dú)立成分，為文章增色添彩；Consequently，I have every right to believe that I shall be very likely to be admitted to my dreaming university．本句中使用了高級(jí)詞匯、固定搭配和賓語(yǔ)從句．文章層次結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，精彩不斷．

解答 Dear Sam，
Thank you for your concern．It is now common knowledge that the College Entrance Examination is held on June 6 and 7 annually，as a national policy，during which，seven different subjects are tested depending on what you learn，science or art．（高分句型） For me，Chinese，Math，English，Politics，History and Geography are included．
Due to its great importance，every student in China would do his best to get ready for it，and I am no exception．（高分句型） I spent a whole year reviewing all the subjects carefully until I thought I was fully prepared．Eventually，the day came．Nervous at first，but I did give the best．Frankly speaking，the papers were   not so hard for me despite some difficulty．Consequently，I have every right to believe that I shall be very likely to be admitted to my dreaming university．（高分句型） Just wish me good luck．
Looking forward to your reply．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming

點(diǎn)評(píng) 應(yīng)該注意適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，比如適當(dāng)選用表示因果、遞進(jìn)、轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連接詞，使文章流暢、通順，并避免因反復(fù)使用句式相同的簡(jiǎn)單句而造成的單調(diào)感．（1）認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁． （2）構(gòu)思要點(diǎn)．根據(jù)題目要求，理解要表達(dá)的要點(diǎn)．設(shè)計(jì)好文章的層次段落，考慮所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱等，把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，構(gòu)成文章框架．（3）選詞造句，避難選易．（4）認(rèn)真檢查，避免錯(cuò)誤．仔細(xì)閱讀全文，查找是否有錯(cuò)，注意時(shí)態(tài)、單詞拼寫、字母大小寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否有誤，句式是否正確．邏輯是否一致．