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3．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下面畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
     Generally speaking，the relationship between students and people around us are good．We are getting on well with each other．Therefore，there still exist some problems．Some students lose his temper easily because of anxiety and learning burden．They sometime quarrel with others，which is very disappointed．In my opinion，we middle school students should make our efforts improve the situation．Firstly，we should respect of other people．Secondly，when we are not feeling happily，we can chat with our friends or teachers or even parents．It is likely whether they can give us some reasonable advices．Last but not least，we can try to make some changes in our way of life．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介紹了父母和孩子之間的關(guān)系以及我們應(yīng)該怎樣改善之間的關(guān)系．

解答 Generally speaking，the relationship between students and people around us are  good．
                                                                                                                is
We are getting on well with each other．Therefore，there still exist some problems．
                                                              However
Some students lose his temper easily because of anxiety and learning burden．They 
                             their
sometime quarrel with others，which is very disappointed．In my opinion，we middle
sometimes                                                   disappointing
school students should make our efforts∧improve the situation．Firstly，we should
                                                         to
respect of other people．Secondly，when we are not feeling happily，we can chat
            去掉of                                                                      happy
with our friends or teachers or even parents．It is likely whether they can give us
                                                                                  that
some reasonable advices．Last but not least，we can try to make some changes in our way of life． 
                         advice
1．a(chǎn)re改為is    考查主謂一致．本句主語是the relationship，所以謂語動詞應(yīng)該用第三人稱單數(shù)形式．
2．Therefore改為However   考查連詞．前后是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而且有逗號隔開，所以用however．
3．his改為their   考查人稱代詞．本句主語是Some students，所以后面應(yīng)該用their．
4．sometime改為sometimes 考查副詞．sometimes表示有時，作時間狀語，表頻率．
5．disappointed改為disappointing   考查形容詞．修飾人的情感用-ed形式，修飾物或者某件事，用-ING形式，本句中是指某件事令人失望，所所以用disappointing．
6．improve前加to    考查不定式．不定式表示目的．所以要加to．
7．去掉of    考查及物動詞用法．respect是及物動詞，后面接賓語時不需要介詞．
8．happily改為happy   考查形容詞．feel是系動詞，后面應(yīng)該用形容詞做表語．
9．whether改為that    考查固定句式．It is likely that是固定句式，意思是"有可能…"．
10．a(chǎn)dvices改為advice 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．a(chǎn)dvice是不可數(shù)名詞，所以沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式．

點評 本題要求考生特別耐心答題，注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時態(tài)是否一致．各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應(yīng)用．一般的這類題型不會出現(xiàn)太復(fù)雜的單詞和句子，這類題型考察基礎(chǔ)知識較多．平時應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)．修改前先細讀短文，標出出錯的位置，改完以后還得細讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯．