Question

如今，我們?cè)谲囌尽⒉蛷d、商場(chǎng)等公共場(chǎng)所都能看見許多成年人和小孩在不停地?cái)[弄手機(jī)。請(qǐng)你針對(duì)這一現(xiàn)象，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)100左右，要點(diǎn)包括：
1．描述現(xiàn)象；
2．分析原因(至少兩條)；
3．說明影響；
4．提出建議。

Answer 1

Nowadays no matter where we are，we can see many adults and children playing with their mobile phones.This can happen at a bus stop，in a restaurant or at a supermarket.Why is that?
We've probably got two reasons.The first reason is supposed to be that people are trying to make good use of time.And the second one may be that people show little interest in what's happening around them.However，focusing only on what's on our mobile phones may not only do harm to our eyesight，but also prevent us from communicating normally.
Therefore，some other ways to kill time are strongly suggested.For me，chatting with others is a good replacement of playing always with mobile phones.

解析名師點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文是一篇提綱作文，要點(diǎn)齊全，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練，有以下亮點(diǎn)：
1．高級(jí)詞匯，如：make good use of，do harm to，focus on，prevent...from doing等的運(yùn)用十分恰當(dāng)。
2．開頭讓步狀語(yǔ)從句的使用，動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用使文章句子顯得靈活多變。
3．However，not only...but also，therefore等關(guān)聯(lián)詞的運(yùn)用使文章前后銜接自然。