Question

仔細觀察下面一幅圖畫，根據(jù)圖畫的內(nèi)容，寫一篇詞數(shù)100左右的英語短文。

情景：假定你叫李華，家住香港。你和幾個朋友約定星期六在中心公園聚會�，F(xiàn)請你寫封信邀請在學(xué)校居住的Brown女士參加，并根據(jù)下圖告訴她來中心公園的路線。

參考詞匯：have a gathering party(聚會)

這是一篇圖畫說明文，根據(jù)圖畫，指明路線，如何到達中心公園。注意觀察圖畫，確定出發(fā)點、行走路線、目的地，靈活使用表達路線的表達語。

Dear Mrs Brown,

We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us.

 

 

 

 

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Mrs Brown,

We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday. Here is how you can find us. We'll have our gathering party in the Central Park. Maybe you've been there, haven't you?

Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street. Then turn right at the second crossing and you'll find a hospital. Just opposite it is a No. 7 bus stop. Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop. Central Park is just in front of it. We'll have our gathering party in a boat on the lake. What a funny thing! Do come on time. We'll wait for you at the park gate.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇圖畫作文，要求根據(jù)圖畫的內(nèi)容，寫一篇詞數(shù)100左右的英語短文。寫圖畫作文首先要仔細審圖，獲取主要信息，確定寫作要點。根據(jù)所給圖畫內(nèi)容以及所給提示信息可知本文是告訴Brown女士參加聚會的路線，屬于說明文范疇。而且獲取的信息是Brown應(yīng)該從學(xué)校出發(fā)，目的地是中心公園（the Central Park）.。在寫作時要根據(jù)圖畫信息，靈活使用指路的表達語，指明如何到達中心公園。此外，說明文還要注意語言的簡練，應(yīng)該多使用簡單句，避免使用復(fù)雜的句式，而且文章應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時。

【亮點說明】本篇范文語言簡潔明了，清楚詳細地指明了路線，很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)。在文章開頭作者首先表達了自己聽到她能參加聚會的高興和感激。然后告訴Brwon 女士聚會的地點和具體的路線。在文中，作者使用了多種簡單句式，比如祈使句，Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street.感嘆句What a funny thing!還有并列句Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop.等。而且反義問句Maybe you've been there, haven't you?的出現(xiàn)增強了文章語言的感染力和親和力。

考點：考查圖畫作文