Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有l(wèi)0處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第ll處起)不計(jì)分。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m very much glad to hear that your shopping centre will build non-smoking supermarket. In my opinion, it’s a good idea to do so, for it can not only help the smokers to smoke less, and it can also do good to other customers’ health. Since you had given up selling cigarettes, the customers don’t like smoking are sure to support you. In addition, smoke in the shopping centre may cause fire, which is dangerous to both your possessions and the safe of the customers. In a word, the non-smoking supermarket will not effect your business. To the contrary, it will help you attract more customers who want to keep health. 
Best wishes!

Answer 1

【小題1】去掉much
【小題2】non-smoking前加a
【小題3】and→but
【小題4】had→have
【小題5】don’t前加who
【小題6】smoke→smoking
【小題7】safe→safely
【小題8】effect→affect
【小題9】To→On（the contrary）
【小題10】health→healthy

解析試題分析：本篇短文是作者對(duì)于商場(chǎng)要建無(wú)煙超市所發(fā)表的看法。在作者看來(lái)，建無(wú)煙商場(chǎng)不但可以幫助吸煙的人減少吸煙而且有利于其他顧客的身體健康；此外也減少了發(fā)生火災(zāi)的幾率，總之建無(wú)煙商場(chǎng)不會(huì)影響生意，只會(huì)吸引更多的顧客前來(lái)購(gòu)物。
【小題1】I’m very much glad to hear that… 。very much 用來(lái)修飾動(dòng)詞，而此處是修飾形容詞glad，所以用副詞very，故去掉much。
【小題2】your shopping centre will build non-smoking supermarket.因?yàn)閟upermarket是可數(shù)名詞，此處指建一個(gè)無(wú)煙超市所以需在non-smoking前加a。
【小題3】it can not only help the smokers to smoke less, and it can also do good to …此句句意為：不但幫助吸煙的人少吸煙而且也對(duì)其他顧客健康有益，固定搭配 not only…but also 表示不但。。。而且的意思，所以把a(bǔ)nd改為but。
【小題4】Since you had given up selling cigarettes,此句中不再銷(xiāo)售香煙是指現(xiàn)在的狀況，所以用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)，所以had改為have。
【小題5】the customers don’t like smoking are sure to support you.。從句意可知句中的顧客是指不喜歡吸煙的顧客，所以don’t前加who構(gòu)成定語(yǔ)從句，而主句謂語(yǔ)是are sure to，句意：那些不吸煙的顧客肯定是支持你的。答案為don’t前加who。
【小題6】smoke in the shopping centre may cause fire,句中somke動(dòng)詞不做主語(yǔ)，所以smoke改為smoking。
句意：在購(gòu)物中心吸引可能會(huì)引起火災(zāi)。
【小題7】the safe of the customers此處是指顧客的安全，應(yīng)該用名詞，所以.safe改為safety。
【小題8】the non-smoking supermarket will not effect your business.句意是無(wú)煙超市將不會(huì)影響你的生意。而句中effect做動(dòng)詞意思為“實(shí)現(xiàn)，引起”不合句意，所以把effect改為affect。
【小題9】To the contrary, it will help you。。。 to the contrary 意思是相反的，不做插入語(yǔ)。而on the contrary意思是“恰恰相反”常常用做插入語(yǔ)，所以把To改為On。
【小題10】who want to keep health。此處保持健康keep后應(yīng)該是形容詞，故把health改為healthy。
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。