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11．I always prided myself on being a wise shopper and having a good nose for bargains．So when I came across a sporting goods store with a sign"Going Out of Business Sale"，I marched into the crowded store．Up and down the aisles （通道），I wandered，humming to myself and enjoying the energy and excitement of a sale．
All of a sudden，there，at the back of the store sat a canoe（輕舟） exactly like my husband's dream Supremo Numero-Uno，whose picture had been stuck on the bathroom mirror for years．My heart beat wildly．I pushed my way through the crowds，and nearly fell into the canoe looking for the price tag．There it was，with the manufacturer's suggested price at﹩6，750 plus tax crossed out and a handwritten TO CLEAR﹩750 AS IS．Must be a mistake．﹩6000 off？Salesman．I had to talk to a salesman．I spotted a young fellow with a"Hi．I'm Mathew"．"Mathew．Tell me about this El Supremo canoe．What's wrong with it？Why is it only﹩750？"
"Oh．There's nothing wrong with it．It's brand new．We're closing the store．It's on clearance like everything else．I'll go check．"A few minutes later he came back and said，"I'm sorry ma'am．Someone made a mistake on the sale tag．It should be﹩4，750 for the whole package．"
I felt tears well up in my eyes．"Oh well"，I said sadly．"Of course，it was too good to be true．This is exactly like my husband's dreamboat．I guess I started to dream myself when I saw that price tag．He's going to be 62 years old Friday．H ad to retire early for his health．It's been hard on just the pension but the stubborn old fool has been saving﹩10 every week for years to buy one just like this．I promise I won't buy anything，but it's just an old man's silly dream，you know．Always said he wanted to fish in a canoe after he retired，"my voice lowered and I turned and walked away．

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I was already at the mall door when Mathew caught up with me．"Do you have﹩750 plus﹩25 for delivery，ma'am？"？""Yes．Yes．That's about all I have，""Well then，you just have your husband sitting at the front gate on Friday morning around 10 o'clock so he can be there when my Dad and I come to unload his new canoe．We'll even put a bow on it for his birthday．"I started to cry．My old hand shook as I wrote out my cheque．
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"Ma'am．There's something you should know．This store was my Grandpa's and the canoe had been ordered by him．He always promised to retire one day．Said he wanted to spend time relaxing and out fishing in a canoe．"He swallowed hard．"My Grandpa died，sudden-like，just last week．He was only 68 years old．I think he'd be mighty happy that your husband will get this canoe．You just have to make sure he uses it a lot，okay？Promise？""I promise，"I said as I dashed off to look for my dear sweet husband．
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Answer 1

分析 本文屬于讀寫任務寫作，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內容．認真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點去表達，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系．寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采．
亮點句型一：you just have your husband sitting at the front gate on Friday morning around 10 o'clock so he can be there when my Dad and I come to unload his new canoe．你只要讓你丈夫在星期五早上十點左右坐在前門上，等我爸爸和我來卸他的新獨木舟時，他就能到了．have sb doing是一個固定結構，"have+sb．/sth．（賓語）+現(xiàn)在分詞（賓語補足語）"意為"叫/讓/使某人做某事或讓某種情況發(fā)生"．賓語 sb．/sth．后面用現(xiàn)在分詞作賓語補足語，表示賓語與現(xiàn)在分詞表示的動作之間為主動關系，且動作正在進行．此句．so 引導的是一個結果狀語從句，
亮點句型二：I think he'd be mighty happy that your husband will get this canoe．我想他會非常高興你丈夫能得到這只獨木舟．句子he'd be mighty happy that your husband will get this canoe，是一個賓語從句，在這個賓語從句中句子that your husband will get this canoe是形容詞happy的賓語從句．

解答 I was already at the mall door when Mathew caught up with me．"Do you have 750plus25 for delivery，ma'am？""Yes．Yes．That's about all I have，""Well then，you just have your husband sitting at the front gate on Friday morning around 10 o'clock so he can be there when my Dad and I come to unload his new canoe．（亮點句型一）We'll even put a bow on it for his birthday．"I started to cry．My old hand shook as I wrote out my cheque．
"Ma'am．There's something you should know．This store was my Grandpa's and the canoe had been ordered by him．He always promised to retire one day．Said he wanted to spend time relaxing and out fishing in a canoe．"He swallowed hard．"My Grandpa died，sudden-like，just last week．He was only 68 years old．I think he'd be mighty happy that your husband will get this canoe．（亮點句型二）You just have to make sure he uses it a lot，okay？Promise？""I promise，"I said as I dashed off to look for my dear sweet husband．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．