Question

6．假設你是高一學生李華，將要參加學校的英語演講比賽．你要演講的題目是"How to Improve Our Physical（身體的） and Mental（心理的） Health"．請綜合以下其他同學提出的意見并加以補充，寫一篇演講稿．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
  2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Zhou Yonglin：Having more fruit and vegetables can make us healthy．
WangFang：If we want to be physically healthy，we should do regular exercise．
Liu Xu：Talking with friends and traveling a lot can take mental health issues away from us．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
We can have fruit and vegetables，which are full of the vitamins that our body needs．
我們可以吃水果和蔬菜，這些富含人體所需的維生素．
高分句型二：
Talking with friends and reading a good book are great ways to do this．Whatever you do，just remember to keep happy．
與朋友交談和閱讀一本好書是偉大的方式做到這一點．無論你做什么，只記得保持快樂．

解答 How to Improve Our Physical and Mental Health
Boys and girls，what do you think are the most important things in the world？As far as I am concerned，health is the certainly among them．Today，I'd like to talk about keeping healthy．
To have a healthy body，we must pay attention to what we eat．We can have fruit and vegetables，which are full of the vitamins that our body needs（高分句型一）．For food that is high in fat，such as meat，we should have some，but not too much．Meanwhile，regular exercise plays an important role in physical health．
Besides physical health，we also need to keep a positive frame of mind．Talking with friends and reading a good book are great ways to do this．Whatever you do，just remember to keep happy（高分句型二）．
These things are easy to say．What we need is a strong will and to keep doing them．
That's all．
Thank you．

點評 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎進行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運用和組織方面的能力，而且對學生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．