Question

17．畢業(yè)在即，回首往日的歲月，一定有人值得你感謝．請(qǐng)按下面給出的要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封120～150詞的感謝信，以便上傳至校園網(wǎng)英文頁(yè)面"Student Voice"（學(xué)生心聲）欄目．
1．簡(jiǎn)述收信人對(duì)你的幫助及你的受益情況．
2．表達(dá)你的謝意．
3．表達(dá)你的決心：繼續(xù)努力，以優(yōu)異的成績(jī)回報(bào)對(duì)方．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們給對(duì)你有幫助的人寫(xiě)一封感謝信，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái)．寫(xiě)作需要用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：簡(jiǎn)述收信人對(duì)你的幫助及你的受益情況．表達(dá)你的謝意．表達(dá)你的決心：繼續(xù)努力，以優(yōu)異的成績(jī)回報(bào)對(duì)方．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為簡(jiǎn)述收信人對(duì)你的幫助及你的受益情況．表達(dá)你的謝意．第二部分為表達(dá)你的決心：繼續(xù)努力，以優(yōu)異的成績(jī)回報(bào)對(duì)方．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
be capable of 有能力做某事
inspire sb to do sth鼓舞某人做某事
remain determined保持堅(jiān)定的決心
make…proud of…使…為…感到自豪
高分句型一：I want to thank you for always being there for me，and for teaching me that I am capable of accomplishing anything that I put my mind to．此句兩個(gè)that，第一個(gè)that為賓語(yǔ)從句，第二個(gè)that為定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞anything在定語(yǔ)從句中作賓語(yǔ)．
高分句型二：My hard work and determination will help me pass the college entrance exams，after which I can be admitted to a university．此句after which 為定語(yǔ)從句，介詞+關(guān)系代詞．

解答 With my upcoming graduation from senior middle school，I have put much thought into who helped me the most and it is you．I want to thank you for always being there for me，and for teaching me that I am capable of accomplishing anything that I put my mind to．（高分句型一）Your kind words and constant support have always inspired me to work hard and remain determined，even when things seem difficult．You are a strong，intelligent woman and I want to make you proud of me，just as I am proud of you．（簡(jiǎn)述收信人對(duì)你的幫助及你的受益情況．表達(dá)你的謝意．）
My hard work and determination will help me pass the college entrance exams，after which I can be admitted to a university．（高分句型二）My future success in college will surely make you proud of me．Thank you for always being there to guide me through life's obstacles．（表達(dá)你的決心：繼續(xù)努力，以優(yōu)異的成績(jī)回報(bào)對(duì)方．）
With love and admiration．
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．