Question

下面短文中有10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)的單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10 處，多者（從第11 處起）不計(jì)分。
例如：
I remember how I used to playing outside with my friends during my childhood. We always had a great fun. We played many games in them we had to use our imagination. Playing those games, we learned how to compete, organize groups and be creating. We made up of many games that didn't have to be played with specific toys. Now, the situation is differently. Children are still playing, and instead of playing outdoors, they are playing indoors with high-tech toys. This mean they are staying inside the house all the times, and usually in front of a TV. So they are becoming more lonely and making less friends.

Answer 1

【小題1】playing改成play
【小題2】去掉great前面的a
【小題3】them改成which
【小題4】creating改成creative
【小題5】去掉up后面的of
【小題6】 differently改成different
【小題7】and改成but
【小題8】mean改成means
【小題9】times改成time
【小題10】less改成fewer

解析試題分析：作者回憶自己小時(shí)候是怎么和朋友在外面玩有趣的游戲，而現(xiàn)在的孩子都是呆在室內(nèi)玩高科技玩具，這樣做有很多弊端。
【小題1】我記得童年是怎么和朋友在外面玩的。Used to do過(guò)去常常做…：playing改成play
【小題2】我們總是玩得很愉快。Fun是不可數(shù)名詞：去掉great前面的a
【小題3】我們玩了很多游戲，其中需要使用想象力。這里是定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是games，介詞in后面用關(guān)系代詞：them改成which
【小題4】玩這些游戲，我們學(xué)會(huì)了怎么競(jìng)爭(zhēng)，組織團(tuán)隊(duì)和有創(chuàng)造力。Be+形容詞，creating改成creative
【小題5】我們編造了很多不需要玩具的游戲。Make up編造，去掉up后面的of
【小題6】現(xiàn)在情況不同了。這里用形容詞做表語(yǔ)：differently改成different
【小題7】孩子們孩子玩，但是不是在戶(hù)外。這兩句話是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：and改成but
【小題8】這意味著他們整天都呆在房間里。主語(yǔ)是this，謂語(yǔ)用單數(shù)：mean改成means
【小題9】all the time一直：times改成time
【小題10】現(xiàn)在他們變得更孤獨(dú)，交更少的朋友。friends 是可數(shù)名詞，不能用less修飾，改成fewer
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)