分析 寫(xiě)好這類(lèi)作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟:1. 認(rèn)真審題,找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句,確定中心思想.2. 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句,草擬提綱,梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3. 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài).注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次.4.最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況,有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一:
Animal is the friend of mankind,such cruel behavior should be eliminated.
動(dòng)物是人類(lèi)的朋友,這樣殘忍的行為應(yīng)該被杜絕.
高分句型二:
What I am eager to do is to raise people's awareness of animal protection and appeal to more people to care for our earth companies.
我想要做的是提高人們保護(hù)環(huán)境的意識(shí),呼吁更多的人關(guān)心我們地球的伴侶.
解答 Dear editor
Recently,the Xi'an Medical University experimental dogs had been abandoned led social buzz.How cruel behavior it is!Animal is the friend of mankind,such cruel behavior should be eliminated(高分句型一).
As far as I am concerned,something must be done to stop this illegal action.We believe"no buying,no killing".First,we must make concerning laws to protect these animals in danger.Second,we must take some measures to protect animals effectively.Animals are our friends and part of our environment.Third,we should raise people's awareness to protect animals and our environment.In this way,we can build a harmonious society and ensure a sustainable development.What I am eager to do is to raise people's awareness of animal protection and appeal to more people to care for our earth companies(高分句型二).
It is my belief that all human beings can make a difference together.I would appreciate it if my application could get your approval.
Yours
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇開(kāi)放式作文,寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯,而是要添加些內(nèi)容,使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí),要組成一篇通順連貫的短文.需要注意緊扣文章主題,給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括,缺一不可.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式,同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次.
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