Question

假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Tom從網(wǎng)上看到“中國式過馬路”（Chinese style of crossing roads）的相關(guān)報(bào)道后，給你寫信詢問有關(guān)情況�，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，給他寫一封回信。要點(diǎn)如下：

1. 介紹何為“中國式過馬路”（參看圖畫內(nèi)容）

2. 分析原因 (不認(rèn)為行人闖紅燈違法，缺少安全意識(shí))；

3. 指出危害（在斑馬線事故頻發(fā)，死傷人數(shù)多）；

4. 你的看法或希望……

注意：1. 可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章充實(shí)連貫；

2. 詞數(shù)：120左右。

詞匯：斑馬線 zebra line 安全意識(shí)safety awareness  冒犯者 offender

Dear Tom,

How nice to hear from you again. I learn you want to know about Chinese style of crossing roads. ________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

How nice to hear from you again. I learn you want to know about Chinese style of crossing roads. Here’s what I know about it.

“Chinese style of crossing roads” refers to a group of people crossing a road at the crossroads no matter whether the traffic light is green or red. Indeed, this is normally seen in some cities. As a result, many traffic accidents happen at the crossroads or on the zebra line, causing many deaths and injuries.

This phenomenon shows that some people are lacking in safety awareness and some wrongly believe it safe for so many people to cross roads together. Some even think the law won’t punish so many offenders. Therefore, the group effect takes shape and some relevant laws have been ignored.

To our delight, strict laws have been passed to punish those who run the red light. Besides, people have come to get rid of the bad style of crossing roads nowadays.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文的話題是“中國式過馬路”就是指一些人不顧紅燈，直接過馬路。原因和危害在要點(diǎn)里都列了出來�？捶ê拖Ｍ�：考生可以提出加強(qiáng)交通安全教育，以多種方式提升國民的交通意識(shí)等等。從這些方面著手。提綱作文要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。