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4．面對中學生"出國熱"，社會對此有不同看法．請以Studying Abroad為題，根據(jù)以下的信息，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?

Advantages	Disadvantages
1、良好的學習環(huán)境，更利于語言學習． 2、拓寬視野，學習國外先進的科學技術(shù)． 3、傳播各民族間的不同文化．	1、年紀小，缺乏生活經(jīng)驗，自理能力差． 2、情感孤獨，思鄉(xiāng)． 3、生活學習費用高．

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
   2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
   3．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Studying Abroad
In recent years，studying abroad has been popular．Tens of thousands of Chinese students have gone to foreign countries to study．                                   

Answer 1

分析 題干中給出了文章的開頭，所以可以開門見山地對表格上的信息進行縱向?qū)Ρ龋�先�?出國深造"的優(yōu)點進行論述．
1．良好的語言環(huán)境，更利于語言學習：對…有利 be good for…
2．拓展視野，學習國外先進的科學技術(shù)：拓展視野 broaden/widen the horizons；先進技術(shù)；advanced technology．
3．傳播各民族間的不同文化：傳播 broadcast
第二段可以加入一些表示轉(zhuǎn)折和對比的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，如 however 等，來引出"出國深造"的不足之處．
1．年紀小，缺乏生活經(jīng)驗，自理能力差：缺乏某物 lack sth．
2．情感孤獨，思鄉(xiāng)：感到孤獨：feel lonely；思鄉(xiāng) homesick
3．生活學習費用高：費用 fee/cost/expense．
最后一段進行總結(jié)，并說出自己的看法：表達自己看法常用的句型有 in my opinion，as far as I am concerned，personally speaking 等．
【相關(guān)語法點提示】
there be 句型表示"某地有某物"on the one hand …；on the other hand…一方面；另一方面  in my opinion/personally speaking/as far as I am concerned 在我看來

解答 Studying Abroad
        In recent years，studying abroad has been popular．Many Chinese students have gone to foreign countries to study．There are many advantages in attending schools abroad．First，students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures．（高分句型一）Second，we can broaden our horizons and learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries．（高分句型二）Third，we can learn foreign languages more quickly in a good language environment．
        However，there are some disadvantages．Most of the students are too young to live alone without any living experience．Besides，being far away from their home country，they may feel lonely and homesick．（高分句型三）Also，of course，the fees are much higher there than at home．
        In spite of these，advantages are more than disadvantages．In my opinion，it is advisable to attend school abroad．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．