Question

1．下面這幅照片展現(xiàn)了女兒為回家媽媽拿包的情景．請(qǐng)根據(jù)你對(duì)這幅照片的理解用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文．
你的短文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：
描述照片內(nèi)容，如情景、人物、動(dòng)作，等等；
結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕母邢耄?br />舉例說(shuō)明你能為家長(zhǎng)減負(fù)做些什么．
注意：
可參照?qǐng)D中文字及下面文章開頭所給提示，作必要的發(fā)揮想象．
詞數(shù)150左右．開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名．
The burden of students has been a hot topic for years，but the load of parents has received little attention，especially from their own children．

Answer 1

分析 本文為看圖作文，采用"圖表+提綱類"形式．根據(jù)對(duì)照片的理解及英語(yǔ)提示寫一篇短文．寫作要點(diǎn)：描述照片內(nèi)容；結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)勀愕母邢�；舉例說(shuō)明你能為家長(zhǎng)減負(fù)做些什么．既是提綱作文又是圖畫類作文．寫作時(shí)可按"三段式"來(lái)寫，首先描述圖片點(diǎn)明主題，然后分析概述其含義，最后發(fā)表感想．基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第三人稱為主．重要短語(yǔ)：remove sth from…．（從…去除某物．），remind sbof sth（提醒某人某物…..），be engaged in（忙于），pay attention to（注意），in return（作為回報(bào)），do one's best to（努力做），so as to（為了），convince sb （使某人信服）．

解答 The burden of students has been a hot topic for years，but the load of parents has received little attention，especially from their own children．
     The picture shows us a touching moment when a little girl comes to greet mom．Realizing her mom must be very tired after a day's work，the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder．【高分句型】In response，the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels．（描述照片內(nèi)容）
     All this reminds me of my mother who has been doing whatever she could to let me have the best．【高分句型】But，totally engaged in my own study，I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels，and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return．【高分句型】（結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，談?wù)劯邢耄?br />     Now I know I can do my best to help with the everyday washing，bedroom cleaning，or at least prepare breakfast myself，so as to share mother's daily burden．The picture convinces me it is more important to be a good daughter than a"good"student．（舉例說(shuō)明能為家長(zhǎng)減負(fù)做些什么）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 寫作看圖作文時(shí)，首先認(rèn)真看圖，結(jié)合圖片和文字，確定所要表達(dá)的主題是什么，然后圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，合理想象，對(duì)譯出的要點(diǎn)通過(guò)合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞使表達(dá)連貫．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．