Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加: 在此處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出修改的詞。
刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改: 在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意:   1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。
Grandma Moses was crazy about painting soon before she picked it up and worked hard at it. She painted careful and her works were nice. She first painted only to please oneself, and then began to sell her works with a little money. In 1993, a collector, Louis Caldor happen to see several of Grandma Moses’ work hanging in a shop. He liked them, buying them at once, and set out to look for less. Caldor held a show to introduce the works of Grandma Moses other artists. Grandma Moses, who was world-famous, was died on December 13, 1961，at the age of 101.

Answer 1

【小題1】before→after
【小題2】careful→carefully
【小題3】oneself→herself
【小題4】with→for
【小題5】happen→happened,
【小題6】work→works
【小題7】buying →bought,
【小題8】less →more
【小題9】Moses和other間，加to
【小題10】was died→was

解析試題分析：摩斯奶奶在她學繪畫后不久就對畫畫癡迷起來。她畫地非常仔細，而且作品也非常好。她開始繪畫的時候只是為了自娛自樂，但是后來一位收藏家碰巧發(fā)現(xiàn)了她的作品，便立刻買下了她全部的作品。后來他為了介紹摩斯奶奶的作品而專門辦了一次畫展。
【小題1】考查連詞。soon before she picked it up由上下文可知她是在學畫畫之后才會對繪畫變得著迷上癮，故把before改成after。
【小題2】考查副詞。She painted carefu。修飾動詞應該用副詞，所以把careful改成carefully。
【小題3】考查不定代詞。She first painted only to please oneself,。oneself要隨著主語變化，所以把oneself改成herself。
【小題4】考查介詞。and then began to sell her works with a little money，固定短語：sell sth for some money“某物賣了多少錢”，故把 with改成for。
【小題5】考查動詞時態(tài)。Louis Caldor happen to see several of Grandma Moses’ work，文章背景是過去時態(tài)，所以把 happen改成happened，
【小題6】考查名詞單復數(shù)。several of Grandma Moses’ work。由語境可知此處work表示作品，應該用復數(shù)形式，故把work改成works。
【小題7】考查謂語動詞。He liked them, buying them at once, and set out to look for less 此處表示三個連續(xù)的動作，所以把buying 改成bought。
【小題8】考查不定代詞set out to look for less。由語境可知此處表示“更多”的意思，故把less 改成more。
【小題9】考查固定短語。introduce the works of Grandma Moses other artists。introduce sth to sb“把……介紹給某人”，故在 Moses和other間，加介詞to。
【小題10】考查謂語動詞。who was world-famous, was died on December。die是不及物動詞，不用被動形式，所以把die前面的was去掉。
考點：考查短文改錯。