Question

你班將組隊參加學校組織的集體舞比賽（group dancing competition）,班長希望大家積極參與。對此談談你的看法。字數(shù)：120左右
你的文章必須包括以下內容：
l. 你是否會參加比賽；
2. 你做出該決定的具體理由。
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Answer 1

Version 1:
A group dancing competition will be held in our school and the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in it. While most of my classmates are still hesitating whether to participate, I have said yes to our monitor with great pleasure.
Generally speaking, there are two reasons for my decision. First, it is a good opportunity for me to relax myself, which will enable me to study more efficiently. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy, so goes the saying, which clearly shows us the importance of relaxation. Besides, I think I am a good dancer after learning dance for more than five years. Participating in the contest will be a golden chance for me to show my dancing skills and make some contributions to the class.
For the two reasons mentioned above, it is no surprise that I have such a strong enthusiasm on the group dancing competition.
Version 2:
Today the monitor calls on everybody to take an active part in the group dancing competition which will be held in a couple of days in our school. But after some careful consideration, I have decided not to participate.
There are a number of reasons for my decision. First and foremost, as the College Entrance Exam is just around the corner, study is the top priority for me. Participating in the group dancing competition has to give way because it might take me too much time. What’s more, without any experience of dancing, I don’t think I can be a good dancing partner. I am afraid my poor dancing skills will probably spoil the performance of the whole class. In this case, it’s better for me to be a spectator cheering for my classmates.
For these reasons, it seems more appropriate for me to watch the competition  than to dance myself.

解析試題分析：本書面表達是一種開放性作文，材料非常簡單，學生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的。考生在寫作之前必修認真審題，首先要確定是參加還是不參加集體舞比賽，再根據(jù)所確定的寫出其理由。再有寫作過程中應該注意句子的銜接，高級詞匯和高級句式的運用，以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點說明】范文一是贊成參加集體舞比賽的，該文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如call on，take an active part in，Generally speaking, enable sb. to do, make contributions to，以及諺語All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy,還運用了which引導的非限性定語從句，so引導的倒裝結構，動名詞作主語等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：while，besides, 等等。
范文一是不贊成參加集體舞比賽的，該文中使用好的短語有：call on，take an active part in，a couple of，around the corner，participate in，give way，in this case。銜接句子的連詞有：while，but，as，F(xiàn)irst and foremost，What’s more，because。高級句式及句型有：which引導的定語從句，動名詞短語作主語，without引導的雙重否定句等等。
考點：議論型作文