Question

20．近年來，作為一種新興的交流方式，微信 （WeChat） 正變得越來越受歡迎．請根據(jù)下列表格提示，寫一篇英語短文談?wù)勎⑿诺睦�弊以及你的觀點，并適當(dāng)擴展．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：150左右，開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)；2．書寫工整、卷面整潔

利	弊
使用便捷	浪費時間
獲取資訊	損害健康
便于交流	泄露個人信息
你的觀點 …（至少兩點）

Nowadays，WeChat is becoming more and more popular in the world，                          ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫一篇短文，介紹微信（WeChat）的利與弊，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：微信（WeChat）的利．使用便捷，獲取資訊，便于交流；微信（WeChat）的弊，浪費時間，損害健康，泄露個人信息．我們此篇作文分為三部分，第一部分為對于微信，不同人有不同的觀點．第二部分為介紹微信的利與弊．第三部分為作者的看法．
重點短語與句型：
In addition除…外
an ample amount of  足量的
On the other hand另一方面
As far as sb be concerned就某人而言
be of vital importance 極其重要
高分句型一：Meanwhile，using Wechat，you can also do group chats，or find new friends nearby to talk to，which helps make many friends and express your feelings and opinions more freely．此句用了現(xiàn)在分詞using作伴隨狀語，以及which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句
高分句型二：Therefore，I insist that we shouldn't spend too much time on it．此句insist后跟賓語從句需用虛擬語氣．

解答 Nowadays，WeChat is becoming more and more popular in the world．Different people，however，hold different opinions on this matter．Opinions are divided into two groups．（對于微信，不同人有不同的觀點）
    According to some people，there are lots of reasons for the popularity of Wechat．First of all，it is easy to use．You can log in to it with your phone number and start a conversation by tapping the speak button．In addition，Wechat is a wonderful platform for people to share an ample amount of information．It even supports sending photos and videos．Meanwhile，using Wechat，you can also do group chats，or find new friends nearby to talk to，which helps make many friends and express your feelings and opinions more freely．（高分句型一）On the other hand，some people argue that although Wechat benefits us a lot，it has some drawbacks．When using WeChat，people tend to forget time and some may even get addicted to it，which will definitely affect their study and work．At the same time，spending too much time on the screen does affect eye health，which may cause trouble．Worse still，people may reveal their personal information while using it，which may lead to crimes．（介紹微信的利與弊）
     As far as I'm concerned，everyone is supposed to exploit Wechat within limits．As a student，I acknowledge that Wechat is not only beneficial but also dangerous．Therefore，I insist that we shouldn't spend too much time on it．（高分句型二）We should balance life's competing interests---in a student's case，study，health and safety．And it's of vital importance for us to protect ourselves when we use it．（作者的看法）．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．