Question

6．假如你是李華，你的美國筆友David想了解你高中第一學年的情況．請根據下列所提示的信息給他寫一封回信．
1．感嘆時間過得快；
2．學習上的得與失；
3．學校生活：交友，課外活動等．
注意：
1.100字左右；信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總數．
2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear David，
                                     
What about your school life？Would you like to share it with me？I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 I study very hard here and have learned much new knowledge，which makes me very happy
高分句型二：
 In this school，I have made so many new friends that I never feel lonely
句型一 which makes me very happy 該句是一個由which引導的非限制性定語從句，which在定語從句中作主語
句型二  I have made so many new friends that I never feel lonely 該句中有一個由that引導的結果狀語從句
此外，該文章中還有以下高級詞匯和重要短語：share sth with sb          take part in     make progress in

解答 Dear David，
   How time flies!It is almost one year since I studied in senior high school．I'm glad to share with you my experience in the new school．（表明寫作意圖）
   I study very hard here and have learned much new knowledge，which makes me very happy．（高分句型一）Most excitingly，I've made great progress in English．But I am not good at physics and I'll have to work harder in the next term．
   In this school，I have made so many new friends that I never feel lonely．（高分句型二）After class，I often discuss difficult problems and even share my happiness and sorrow with them．In my spare time，I often take part in different kinds of after-school activities，especially ball games．Therefore，I've grown taller and stronger．（描述學校生活）
   What about your school life？Would you like to share it with me？I'm looking forward to your reply．
   Yours
   Li Hua

點評 該書面表達為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應的寫作要點．考生在平時應注意積累相應的詞匯和短語，在寫作時盡量做到將要點與主題緊密結合，用準確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．