Question

5．下面是一家報(bào)紙的專欄作家Maggie收到的讀者尋求建議的來信，假如你是Maggie，請寫一封回信，其中需包括你對來信所反映問題的觀點(diǎn)和態(tài)度，以及你對"Doubtful Dad"的建議．
Dear Maggie，
My son just announced that he is going away to schoo1．Bobby is a good student，and I am proud of him．Any college would be lucky to have him．My concern is that he has never lived away from home before．Will he be able to take care of himself？What if there's an emergency？
Give me some advice so that I can relax!
Doubtful Dad
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Doubtful Dad，
I am really know your felling because nowadays many parents have a common sense that their children are so precious to them so they always try their best to give their children a happy and meaningful life．Whereas，on one hand，these parents care and protect their children，on the other hand they may do harm to their children．
As far as I am concerned，it is necessary thatyou should giveyour sonmore space and freedom so thathe may become more independent．What's more，it is a good way to lethim study in a boarding school for children must face something by their own，such as，their relationship with friends and student，their study and busy life and so on．You should believe your child could do it well．By doing this，I believe，he may become more independent，brave and responsible．
In summary，spoiling children is no right．Don't worry．You should know better that an independent，responsible and brave person is able to adapt society better．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Maggie．

Answer 1

分析 本篇來信中講述了一名父親十分擔(dān)心他從未離家遠(yuǎn)行的孩子要遠(yuǎn)處出求學(xué)不能照顧好自己，怕出意外．而從中我們很容易知道這是由于父親關(guān)心則亂．因此考生應(yīng)從勸解父親的方面入手，提出觀點(diǎn)和建議．注意使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，以及恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞．
重要短語：
 do harm to，對…有害，a good case in point，一個(gè)恰當(dāng)?shù)睦�子，in summary，總之
高分句子：
As far as I am concerned，it is necessary that parents should give your son more space and freedom so that he may become more independent．本句含有重要句型，it is necessary that，..是必要的．

解答 Dear Doubtful Dad，
     I am really know your felling because nowadays many parents have a common sense that their children are so precious to them so they always try their best to give their children a happy and meaningful life．Whereas，on one hand，these parents care and protect their children，on the other hand they may do harm to their children．（提出自己觀點(diǎn)）
     As far as I am concerned，it is necessary that you should give your son more space and freedom so that he may become more independent．（高分句型）What's more，it is a good way to let him study in a boarding school for children must face something by their own，such as，their relationship with friends and student，their study and busy life and so on．You should believe your child could do it well．By doing this，I believe，he may become more independent，brave and responsible．（提出建議）
     In summary，spoiling children is no right．Don't worry．You should know better that an independent，responsible and brave person is able to adapt society better．（總結(jié)內(nèi)容）
                                                                                                                                   Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                   ours，
                                                                                                                                    Maggie

點(diǎn)評 考生在寫作時(shí)，需要做到以下幾點(diǎn)：第一、認(rèn)真審題，把握所有信息．第二、確定體裁，把握行文格式．第三、羅列提綱，思考表達(dá)方式．第四、組織語言，展開寫作． 寫作時(shí)，運(yùn)用熟悉的英語詞匯、句型等；要盡量運(yùn)用多樣化的句式，注意長短句的結(jié)合、簡單句和復(fù)合句的結(jié)合；要注意上下文的銜接，過渡要自然．第五、認(rèn)真檢查，查漏補(bǔ)缺．