Question

5．假如你是紅星中學的李津．你的美國朋友Peter來信表示，希望了解你校學生課外活動情況，請你用英語寫一封回信，介紹你校學生課外活動．
☆學校為了豐富學生的課外生活開設(shè)了一些俱樂部，如讀書、寫作、籃球、音樂等；
☆課外活動的時間安排：每天下午一個小時；
☆課外活動對學生的益處：如增強體質(zhì)，豐富知識；
☆你加入了一個俱樂部，說明你加入的理由，以及在這門課程中學到了什么．
注意：
（1）請使用規(guī)范英語，詞數(shù)不少于100詞；
（2）可適當增加細節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；
（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Peter，
      I'm glad to hear from you．I would like to tell you something about after-school activities in our school，Hongxing High School．
For one thing，in order to enrich students'life，after-school activities in our school are varied and colorful．Different kinds of clubs are set up，such as reading，basketball，writing and singing．For another，these clubs are open for students for one hour every day．By participating in after-school activities，not only can we build our body and enrich our knowledge，but also we can free us from the heavy load of study．I joined the basketball club because I like basketball very much and I have learned how to be a good player and how to do teamwork．
In a word，I really enjoy the after-school activities．
      Best wishes，
Yours，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
By participating ①in after-school activities，not only can we build our body and enrich our knowledge②，but also we can free us from the heavy load of study．
通過參加課外活動，我們不僅可以增強我們的體質(zhì)，豐富我們的知識，而且我們還可以從繁重的學習任務(wù)中解脫出來．
①participating為動名詞作介詞by的賓語．
②當為了強調(diào)，將not only置于句首時，其后的句子通常要用部分倒裝的形式．
句型二：
I joined the basketball club because ①I like basketball very much and I have learned how②to be a good player and how to do teamwork．
我加入籃球俱樂部是因為我非常喜歡籃球，我學會了如何成為一名優(yōu)秀的球員，以及如何進行團隊合作．
①為because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．
②為"特殊疑問詞+to do"結(jié)構(gòu)作賓語．

解答 Dear Peter，
     I'm glad to hear from you．I would like to tell you something about  after-school activities in our school，Hongxing High School．
     For one thing，in order to enrich students'life，after-school activities in our school are varied and colorful．Different kinds of clubs are set up，such as reading，basketball，writing and singing．（第一個要點：介紹學校為豐富學生的課外生活所開設(shè)的一些俱樂部）For another，these clubs are open  for students for one hour every day．（第二個要點：介紹課外活動的時間安排）By participating in after-school activities，not only can we build our body and enrich our knowledge，but also we can free us from the heavy load of study．【高分句型一】（第三個要點：表述課外活動對學生的益處）I joined the basketball club because I like basketball very much and I have learned how to be a good player and how to do teamwork．【高分句型二】（第四個要點：介紹自己所加入的俱樂部，加入的原因及收獲）
     In a word，I really enjoy the after-school activities．（做出總結(jié)）
     Best wishes．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                        Li Jin

點評 提綱作文實際上是對考生的思路以及文章的寫作范圍給出了明確的限定，因此考生在寫作時，應(yīng)在保證內(nèi)容要點齊全的同時進行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮；要根據(jù)提綱全面構(gòu)思文章內(nèi)容，根據(jù)內(nèi)容構(gòu)思詞語和句型結(jié)構(gòu)；注意句子的時態(tài)，詞語的豐富和句型的多樣性．