Question

【題目】假如你是高二（1）班的班長李華，你們班打算開一次題為“如何提高英語口語水平”的主題班會，想邀請外籍教師Johnson參加，請你給他寫一封郵件，邀請他參加此次活動。具體內(nèi)容如下：

時間：下周一下午5:20。

地點：教學(xué)樓二層會議室。

希望Johnson能給大家一些提高英語口語的建議，并回答學(xué)生們提出的相關(guān)問題。

表示期待。

Dear Johnson, ________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Johnson,

Our class will hold a class meeting with the topic of “how to improve our oral English”, and here I seriously invite you to join us on behalf of our class.

Our class meeting will be held in the meeting room on the second floor of the teaching building at 17:20 next Monday. We sincerely hope that you can not only come and offer some valuable suggestions on how to improve oral English but also answer the related questions raised by the students.

Thank you in advance! All of us will be looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一篇郵件寫作，考生首先要注意郵件的基本格式，稱呼后面用逗號而不是冒號，落款處也需注意，寫上敬語。本文主要交代的內(nèi)容就是主題班會的時間，地點，以及希望John給出的建議�？忌�可能對書信郵件的寫作比較陌生，不知該如何下筆。其實我們完全可以以不變應(yīng)萬變，用平時議論文的總分總結(jié)構(gòu)來寫。

1.表面寫郵件目的：正文直接亮出目的（ I seriously invite you to join us on behalf of our class.），告知收件人寫信的原因是邀請他參加班會。

2.交代相關(guān)的信息：時間和地點（Our class meeting will be held in the meeting room on the second floor of the teaching building at 17:20 next Monday.），希望受邀人發(fā)揮的作用（you can not only come and offer some valuable suggestions on how to improve oral English but also answer the related questions raised by the students.）

3.結(jié)束語，表示對收件人的禮貌。（Thank you in advance! All of us will be looking forward to your coming.）

【范文亮點】

1.范文巧妙使用介詞交代內(nèi)容，簡潔流暢。如用with結(jié)構(gòu)，引出班會主題（with the topic of “how to improve our oral English”）；用介詞on、at交代班會的時間和地點（on the second floor of the teaching building at 17:20 next Monday.）

2.范文運用了not only...but also關(guān)聯(lián)詞（you can not only come and offer some valuable suggestions on how to improve oral English but also answer the related questions raised by the students.）增加了范文的文采。