Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面四幅圖畫內(nèi)容，寫一篇短文，記述昨天發(fā)生在你叔叔身上的事。
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。 2.參考詞匯：吊銷駕照：revoke a driving license

Answer 1

One possible version：
My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.
Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends. He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers. As a result he got drunk. After the meal, his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home, but he didn’t listen to them, saying “No problem” and insisted on doing so. He got into the car and drove away. A few minutes later, he was winding his way in the street when his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital. Unfortunately he had to stay in hospital for several days .Worse still he was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked.
How he regretted what he had done!

解析試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)是圖畫作文。第一步，應(yīng)仔細(xì)審圖，注意圖畫中人或物的體貌表情特征和背景，確定圖畫所要傳達(dá)的信息。第二步要挖掘要點(diǎn)，擬題綱。應(yīng)該根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容的不同，采用不同的段落發(fā)展方式。本篇書面表達(dá)是由四幅圖組成，由圖片內(nèi)容不難看出圖片所要表達(dá)的是關(guān)于酒后駕車的問題，可以按照事情的發(fā)展順序?qū)懗捎洈⑽�。要求寫發(fā)生在叔叔身上昨天的事情，所以文章要使用一般過去時(shí)，使用第三人稱。在行文過程中要注意用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，以充實(shí)文章內(nèi)容。此外，還要盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯和多種句式以增加文章亮點(diǎn)，提供作文檔次。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇范文根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容寫成了一篇記敘文，講述了叔叔的遭遇。使用了一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求，內(nèi)容表達(dá)清楚，基本完成了寫作任務(wù)。文章首先使用My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.引出要講述的事情，然后按照時(shí)間順序講述了發(fā)生的事情。最后以How he regretted what he had done結(jié)尾，整篇文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)，敘述詳略得當(dāng)。而且作者使用了As a result，After the meal, A few minutes later, Worse still等詞有效地起到了連接上下文的作用，使文章內(nèi)容連貫，語言流暢。文章還使用了結(jié)果狀語從句He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers.，時(shí)間狀語從句when his car ran into a tall tree.和感嘆句How he regretted what he had done!
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