【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I’m happy to have older brother. He’s caring, smart or responsible. I’m proud in him, yet I am always annoying him and hurt his feelings.

But one thing made me to see how specially our relationship is, I had a cousin which died seven years ago. On the day of his funeral, his sister says she wished she had had a better relationship with him. But nobody can turn back the hand of time. I don’t want this to happen to my brother and I. I will try to be a better sister.

【答案】

【解析】本文為記敘文。作者記敘了在表哥葬禮上的一些感悟，作者決定一定要和自己的哥哥處好關(guān)系。

第一處：older前加an；考查不定冠詞。此處泛指“一個(gè)哥哥”，應(yīng)使用不定冠詞an。故older前加an。

第二處：or改為and；考查并列連詞。句意：他體貼、聰明和負(fù)責(zé)任。根據(jù)句意可知，此處應(yīng)是并列關(guān)系，并不存在選擇。故or改為and。

第三處：in改為of；考查介詞搭配。be proud of sb.“為某人感到驕傲”為固定搭配詞組。故in改為of。

第四處：hurt改為hurting；考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。此處與annoying為并列關(guān)系，同為現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，動(dòng)詞形式應(yīng)保持一致。句意：但是我總是一直煩他、傷他的感情。故hurt改為hurting。

第五處：去掉see前的to；考查動(dòng)詞搭配。make sb. do sth.“讓某人做某事”，為固定詞組搭配。故去掉see前的to。

第六處：specially改為special；考查形容詞。此處修飾our relationship，應(yīng)使用形容詞形式。故specially改為special。

第七處：which改為who/that；考查定語(yǔ)從句關(guān)系詞。此處為限定性定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為cousin，連詞在從句中作主語(yǔ)。which不能引導(dǎo)修飾人的定語(yǔ)從句。故which改為who/that。

第八處：says改為said；考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知，此處描述的是過(guò)去的動(dòng)作，應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。故says改為said。

第九處：hand改為hands；考查習(xí)慣表達(dá)。句意：但是沒(méi)有人能讓時(shí)間倒流。the hands of time時(shí)間之手，是習(xí)慣表達(dá)。故hand改為hands。

第十處：I改為me；考查代詞。此處與my brother作happen to的并列賓語(yǔ)，應(yīng)使用賓格。故I改為me。

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