Question

假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你和在上海上學(xué)的英國(guó)朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴約。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫一封電子郵件：

1. 表示歉意；

2. 解釋原因：

①我的媽媽突然生病了，我和爸爸把媽媽送到醫(yī)院

②醫(yī)生為她檢查，說媽媽需要休息一周

③我的爸爸下周要出差，我不得不在家照顧我的媽媽

3. 另約時(shí)間。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120~150；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)

Dear Tom,

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Answer 1

I’m writing to make an apology to you. We have decided to go on a trip to Beijing next weekend, but I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go with you.

My mother was ill suddenly, which made my father and me very worried. Therefore, we took her to hospital as quickly as we can. The doctor checked her and said that she needed to stay at home and rest for a week. What’s more, my father will be away on business next week, so I have to look after my mother at home.

I wonder if you have time on July 14? On that day, we can go to Beijing together. I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇電子郵件寫作，寫作緣由是因?yàn)樽约阂蚬�，而不能赴與在上海上學(xué)的英國(guó)朋友Tom下周末去北京旅游的約定。郵件內(nèi)容主要包括表達(dá)歉意，解釋原因，以及另約時(shí)間。時(shí)態(tài)：用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。使用一些高級(jí)句型和詞匯提升作文檔次�！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】第二自然段第一句話My mother was ill suddenly, which made my father and me very worried。使用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，直接說明了失約的主要緣由。句式上面，使用了be sorry to do sth，做某事很抱歉；look forward to doing sth，期待做某事。詞組和短語(yǔ)上面，使用了make an apology to，make sb worried，as quickly as one can，be away on business，What’s more ，look after等，使得文章更加生動(dòng)。在結(jié)構(gòu)上面，文章使用了三段式，第一自然段首先真誠(chéng)地表達(dá)自己的歉意，第二自然段，仔細(xì)說明自己失約的緣由，第三自然段，再次主動(dòng)真誠(chéng)的邀請(qǐng)Tom一起去北京旅游。文章結(jié)果層次分明，調(diào)理清晰。

考點(diǎn)：考查電子郵件寫作