Question

目前，中學(xué)生花錢大手大腳已成為一個(gè)令學(xué)校難以管理的問題。下面是一份關(guān)于零花錢的調(diào)查報(bào)告。請(qǐng)你以此為依據(jù)，寫一篇100詞左右的短文，呼吁大家關(guān)注此問題。短文的開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

來源	父母給的生活費(fèi)
用途	多數(shù)用來買零食，MP4，新潮衣服或支付上網(wǎng)費(fèi)用；少數(shù)用來支付生活費(fèi)
危害	不知掙錢辛苦；盲目攀比；還可能沾染一些其他不良習(xí)慣
呼吁	……

注意：
可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，使語句連貫，符合邏輯，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。
Nowadays, middle school students tend to be very free with their pocket money, which has become a difficult problem to solve for schools.

Answer 1

Nowadays, middle school students tend to be very free with their pocket money, which has become a difficult problem to solve for schools.
Generally, parents give their children some money every month as their living expenses. However, some students spend less on regular meals and everyday goods to save their pocket money with which they buy snacks, MP4 players, fashionable clothes and so on. What's worse, they spend it on playing computer games or surfing the Internet. Therefore, they don't know how hard it is to earn money. In addition, they are so young that they may learn to worship those with lots of pocket money blindly and fall into the bad habit.
In order to help the students, we should call on parents monitoring the pocket money. The school should take proper measures to educate the students and make them build up the good value of consuming.

試題分析：考查開放性作文的寫作。本文是一份關(guān)于零花錢的調(diào)查報(bào)告，需要考生從中學(xué)生使用零花錢的現(xiàn)狀，存在的問題，你認(rèn)為應(yīng)該如何合理使用零花錢等三個(gè)方面展開。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：開放性作文只給出了一個(gè)話題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地很大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。