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5．假定你班在"珍愛(ài)生命，拒闖紅燈"教育活動(dòng)中，召開了一次主題班會(huì)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文．

行人闖紅燈的危害	1．妨礙交通，影響車輛的正常行駛．
	2．容易引發(fā)事故，危及他人和自身的生命安全．
	3．…（自己設(shè)想）
對(duì)行人闖紅燈的處罰措施	1．批評(píng)教育，讓其意識(shí)到闖紅燈的危害性．
	2．當(dāng)場(chǎng)給予警告并罰款．
	3．…（自己設(shè)想）

注意：
         1．內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫；
         2．詞數(shù)：120左右．
參考詞匯：pedestrian n．（行人）；jay-walk vi．（亂穿馬路）； reprimand vt．（批評(píng)，訓(xùn)誡）

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息針對(duì)"珍愛(ài)生命，拒闖紅燈"，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從行人闖紅燈的危害和對(duì)行人闖紅燈的處罰措施兩個(gè)方面來(lái)討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：obey rules 遵守規(guī)則；in a word 總之；negative effect 負(fù)面影響；take measures 采取措施；on the spot 當(dāng)場(chǎng)；This blocks traffic，seriously affects drivers and causes accidents to happen，endangering the safety of pedestrians and drivers alike．（高分句型一）
It is really a pity to see all this in our society，and to deal with the situation，the government has taken some measures．（高分句型二）
When caught jaywalking，pedestrians are reprimanded so that they will become aware of the dangers of doing this，or they are fined on the spot．（高分句型三）

解答 Recently we held a class meeting to discuss the problem of pedestrians crossing the street while the traffic light is red．As we could see，some pedestrians don't obey traffic rules，and jay-walk frequently．This blocks traffic，seriously affects drivers and causes accidents to happen，endangering the safety of pedestrians and drivers alike．（高分句型一） In a word，jaywalking produces negative effects and does not help to develop good social behavior．
    It is really a pity to see all this in our society，and to deal with the situation，the government has taken some measures．（高分句型二）When caught jaywalking，pedestrians are reprimanded so that they will become aware of the dangers of doing this，or they are fined on the spot．（高分句型三）Sometimes the traffic police will report jaywalkers to their workplace and expose them to the public．However，it will still take a long time to stop pedestrians from jaywalking．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．