分析 本文是圖畫類作文,作文主題明確,即"An Honest Finder",要求根據(jù)六幅圖的先后順序描述上周周末你校高三學(xué)生王芳拾金不昧的感人事跡并加以贊揚(yáng)評論.
在寫作時,人稱以第一和第三人稱為主.時態(tài)以一般過去時為主.根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展,抓住細(xì)節(jié)按順序安排好材料.
寫作要點(diǎn):1.報(bào)道故事的全部經(jīng)過;2.對其事跡加以贊揚(yáng)評論,并號召向她學(xué)習(xí).
重要短語:do a moving deed (做了一個感人的事),lie on the ground (躺在地上),bend down (彎腰),picked up(撿起),call sb (打電話給某人),hurry to sb(匆忙走到某人身邊),gave sth to sb(把某事給某人),be grateful(感激的),take out(拿出); in reward (作為回報(bào));learn from sb(向某人學(xué)習(xí)).
【高分句型一】
1.Recently a moving deed that was done by Wang Fang,a student in Senior Grade 3,has spread all over our school.
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"that"引導(dǎo)的定語從句,先行詞為"a moving deed",主句為"Recently a moving deed has spread all over our school","a student in Senior Grade 3"為"Wang Fang"的同位語.
【高分句型二】
2.Last weekend,①Wang Fang was walking towards the bus stop to go home when she②found a purse lying on the ground.
①此處是句型"Sb was doing when sth did"意為"某人正在做某事就在此時又發(fā)生了…".
②此處為"find+賓語+賓語補(bǔ)足語"結(jié)構(gòu),具體為"find+sth+現(xiàn)在分詞"
【高分句型三】
3.①When Wang Fang gave the wallet to the lady,②she was so grateful that she took out 100 yuan in reward.
①此處是由連詞"when"引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句,主句為"she was so grateful that she took out 100 yuan in reward".
②此處為"so+形容詞+that+句子"意為"如此以致于"引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句.
解答 An Honest Finder
Recently a moving deed that was done by Wang Fang,a student in Senior Grade 3,has spread all over our school.【高分句型一】Last weekend,Wang Fang was walking towards the bus stop to go home when she found a purse lying on the ground.【高分句型二】She bent down and picked it up.As she opened it,she discovered there was much money,and a name card with the owner's telephone number.So she went to a telephone booth nearby and called the owner.Then she waited on the chair by the bus stop patiently until a lady hurried to her.When Wang Fang gave the wallet to the lady,she was so grateful that she took out 100 yuan in reward.【高分句型三】
However,she refused it and waved goodbye to her.
What a kind girl!I think we all should learn from her.
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