【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

This afternoon, when I was walking to home after school, I noticed my neighbor Uncle Bob lay by the roadside with his right hand on his chest. It was clear he was badly ill. Several passer-by came up and one of whom offered to call 120. Several minutes later, an ambulance reached ,and took her to the hospital. Then I ran home and told Uncle Bob’s family what had happened. We rushed to the hospital quick. The doctor examined him and suggested he stayed there for a week. I hope Uncle Bob will get good soon.

【答案】

【1】第一處：去掉home前的to

【2】第二處：lay---lying

【3】第三處：在clear后加that

【4】第四處：passer-by改為passers-by

【5】第五處：whom---them

【6】第六處：reached---arrived

【7】第七處：her---him

【8】第八處：quick---quickly,

【9】第九處：stayed---stay,

【10】第十處：good---well/better

【解析】

試題分析：本文講述了作者偶然碰到鄰居生病了，然后送鄰居去醫(yī)院的事情。

【1】第一處：home是地點(diǎn)副詞，前面不需要介詞to。故答案為去掉to。

【2】第二處：notice sb. doing sth.表示注意到某人正在做某事；此處表示我注意到Uncle Bob躺在路邊。故答案為lay改為lying。

【3】第三處：本句是個(gè)含有主語從句的復(fù)合句，在主語從句中什么都不缺用that，而且that不能省略。句意：很明顯它病得厲害。故答案為在clear后加that。

【4】第四處：根據(jù)前面的several，可知后面接可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故答案為passer-by改為passers-by。

【5】第五處：本句中已經(jīng)有連詞and了，所以句中的whom是多余的，只要用them即可。故答案為whom改為them。

【6】第六處：reach是及物動(dòng)詞，后面必須接賓語；此處沒有賓語，所以用不及物動(dòng)詞arrived。故答案為reached改為arrived。

【7】第七處：本文中是把Uncle Bob送到醫(yī)院。故答案為在her改為him。

【8】第八處：本句中的快速地是修飾動(dòng)作；修飾動(dòng)詞用副詞。故答案為quick改為quickly。

【9】第九處：suggest表示建議時(shí)，后面跟的賓語從句用虛擬語氣，即主語+should+動(dòng)詞原形+其它，should可以省略。故答案為stayed改為stay。

【10】第十處：根據(jù)句意，我希望Uncle Bob能快速好起來。Well用作形容詞指身體好，所以此處用well或是well的比較級(jí)。故答案為good改為well/better。

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