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3．假設你是李華，你要給十年后的自己寫一封信，請根據下列要點和你的暢想完成短文．（1）家庭；（2）工作；（3）業(yè)余生活．
注意：（1）次數100左右；（2）可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear Li Hua，
I often imagine what my life would be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．（家庭）I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I'will do a good job in whatever I do （工作）．【高分句型】In my free time，I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．（業(yè)余生活）In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．【高分句型】
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

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分析 本題屬于提綱類作文．你要給十年后的自己寫一封信，請根據下列要點和你的暢想完成短文．（1）家庭；（2）工作；（3）業(yè)余生活，因為提示信息較少，所以要充分發(fā)揮想象，增加適當的細節(jié)以使行文連貫，內容充實．在寫作時要注意本文使用的應該是一般將來時，也要注意多種句式的使用．
這是一篇向報社投稿的文章．材料中已經給出了要點：家庭，工作和生活．因此圍繞著這三點進行構思寫作．首先按照順序描寫未來的家庭，然后寫工作，最后想象業(yè)余生活．這樣行文就比較流暢，自然，符合寫作的要求等．
本文使用了一些高級的詞匯和短語：get along  with sb與某人相處；in one's free time在某人的空閑的時候；such as 例如；continue to do sth繼續(xù)做某事；in a word 總之
【高分句型】
1．I'will ①do a good job in②whatever I do．
①do a good job in在某方面做的好．
②whatever I do．作為介詞in的賓語從句．
2．①In a word，my life will be ②much richer and more colorful．
①in a word 總之．
②much修飾比較級，表程度．

解答 Dear Li Hua，
        I often imagine what my life would be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．（家庭）I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I'will do a good job in whatever I do （工作）．【高分句型】In my free time，I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．（業(yè)余生活）In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．【高分句型】
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．