Question

假設(shè)你是李華。最近你班舉行了一次班會(huì)，班會(huì)的主題是：太空探險(xiǎn)的意義。請(qǐng)結(jié)合下表內(nèi)容，給校報(bào)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇文章，客觀地介紹討論的情況并表達(dá)你自己的觀點(diǎn)。

一些同學(xué)贊同	一些同學(xué)反對(duì)	你自己的觀點(diǎn)
●獲得新的知識(shí)	●耗資巨大
●從太空取得新資源	●宇航員的安全問(wèn)題
●擴(kuò)大人類(lèi)的生存空間

 注意：1．字?jǐn)?shù)：100詞左右。
2．標(biāo)題與開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
Outer Space Explorations, YES or NO?
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Answer 1

We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.
Some of us hold it important to research the outer space for the reasons as follows. First of all, people can get a better understanding of the outer space through their exploration. Second, new resources can be found there for human use. Third, this exploration can possibly bring about new living space for human beings.
However, others think quite differently. They said this kind of exploration is much too costly. Besides, it is very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.
In my opinion, people should be pioneering, and therefore such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out.

解析試題分析：本文屬于陳述正反方觀點(diǎn)的議論文作文，主題是對(duì)太空探險(xiǎn)的意義的不同觀點(diǎn)，題目給出了大部分要點(diǎn)，也要考生給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，先是一些同學(xué)反對(duì)的觀點(diǎn)，然后是贊同的觀點(diǎn)，還有無(wú)所謂的態(tài)度，最后是自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求考生用地道的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，駕馭語(yǔ)言的能力強(qiáng)，選擇詞匯的時(shí)候要選擇相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯，也要運(yùn)用多種句型，讓文章更有變化。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候要運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把要點(diǎn)串聯(lián)起來(lái)，使文章成為一個(gè)整體。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言流暢，多用詞組和句型：bring about產(chǎn)生， In my opinion在我看來(lái), are worth trying out值得試驗(yàn).We had an argument over whether it was necessary to carry out outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.這句話(huà)用了賓語(yǔ)從句，Some of us hold it important to research the outer space for the reasons as follows.這句話(huà)用了it做形式賓語(yǔ)， it is very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.這句話(huà)用了it做形式主語(yǔ)。還有范文還使用了First of all, Second, Third,  Besides,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。
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