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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Nowadays, the computer technology develops very fast that the Internet has become more and more popular. Some students regarded it as a great helper. Because there has a lot of information on line, so you can surf the Internet for any information you need in a short time without working hard in the library. This is also very convenient to talk with others by using the Internet. Moreover, other students think that there is some information on line that is not good for students. In addition, spend too much time playing games will not only have a bad effect on their studies but also do harm for health. Therefore, we should make properly use of the Internet. It is of great important to separate good plants from wild weeds.

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【解析】第一處：固定搭配so...that...如此……以至于……。故very改成so。

第二處：這里表示的是一個經(jīng)常性、普遍的動作，所以不能用過去分詞regarded，應用一般現(xiàn)在時regard。故regarded改成regard。

第三處：there be句型。故has改成is。

第四處：這一句是因果關系，在英語中因為和所以只用其一，故把so刪去。

第五處：這里表示前文所說的Internet，此處是一個代詞。代指前文內(nèi)容用it，故This改成It。

第六處：這里的前后兩部分是轉(zhuǎn)折關系。moreover是此外、而且的意思，however、but有但是的意思，但這里和下一句中間有“,”分開，故Moreover改成However。

第七處：這里動詞spend做主語，動詞做主語時，動詞要變?yōu)閯用�詞的形態(tài)。故spend改為spending。

第八處：固定搭配do harm to/be harm for對……有害。故for改成to

第九處：這里是用一個副詞修飾use，proper本身就是副詞，故properly改成proper。