Question

6．目前，學校存在少數(shù)學生考試作弊現(xiàn)象．請你以"My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations"為題，發(fā)表個人看法．
注意：
1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可適當發(fā)揮．
2．短文標題與開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
3．詞數(shù)：100左右．
4．參考詞匯：cheat作弊；please取悅于…；break the rules破壞規(guī)矩
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school．
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Answer 1

分析 這是一篇命題作文，就作弊現(xiàn)象發(fā)表看法．寫作時，首先要寫全要點，包括：列出現(xiàn)象，說明原因，分析弊端，表達看法；其次要以第一人稱來寫作；最后要注意時態(tài)，文章講述的是客觀現(xiàn)實，要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．
重點句型和短語：
take examinations 參加考試
please their parents and teachers 取悅老師和父母
get well prepared for 為…作充分準備
As students，we often take examinations at school，but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us．
句中which引導定語從句修飾examinations．
So when taking examinations，they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers．
句中when引導時間狀語從句，從句中省略了相同的主語和系動詞，是一個省略句．
In my opinion，it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools．
句中it作形式主語，真正的主語是后面的動詞不定式；because引導原因狀語從句．

解答 My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
     It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school．（列舉現(xiàn)象）
     As students，we often take examinations at school，but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us．（高分句型一）On the other hand，some of us are lazy and don't work hard at their lessons．So when taking examinations，they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers．（高分句型二）（分析原因）
     In my opinion，it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools．（高分句型三）We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations．What's more，we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations．（表達看法）

點評 書面表達題考查的是英語的應用能力．寫作時要注意：要點的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時態(tài)使用要正確．