請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2．只允許修改l0處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
I am good at designing and making women’s clothes. In my childhood, I spent a lot of time on my grandmother’s home. She used to being a dressmaker, and at that time I was greatly impressed by her job. They seemed magical when a piece of clothes turned into a beautiful dress, skirt, or blouse. So in my adolescence, I begin to learn how to design women’s clothing from an extremely creative teacher. For me, designing women’s clothing is very interesting and exciting. I like the process of creation very well because I feel even if I were an artist. My the first model is my mother, she always gets a lot of praise when wearing the clothes I have made. In a word, she is very proud for me.


【小題1】on 改成at
【小題2】being改為be
【小題3】They改為It
【小題4】clothes改為cloth
【小題5】begin改成began
【小題6】well改為much
【小題7】even if改為as if
【小題8】去掉first前面的the
【小題9】在she always前面加上and
【小題10】for改為of

解析試題分析：文章介紹作者對(duì)服裝設(shè)計(jì)的興趣是源自童年奶奶的影響，后來(lái)在老師的幫助下學(xué)習(xí)服裝設(shè)計(jì)，穿著她的衣服，作者的媽媽經(jīng)常收到表?yè)P(yáng)，也很以作者為榮。
【小題1】在我的童年我在奶奶家度過(guò)了很多時(shí)間。在奶奶的家，用介詞at，on 改成at
【小題2】她過(guò)去是裁縫。Uesed to do過(guò)去常常做…，being改為be
【小題3】當(dāng)一塊布變成美麗的衣服，這似乎很神奇。(it指代這項(xiàng)工作)，They改為It
【小題4】clothes是衣服，這里是表示“布”，a piece of cloth：一塊布料
【小題5】在我年輕時(shí)代，我就和一個(gè)很有創(chuàng)造力的老師那里學(xué)習(xí)設(shè)計(jì)女士的衣服。因?yàn)槭亲髡吣贻p的時(shí)候，用一般過(guò)去式：begin改成began
【小題6】我非常喜歡這個(gè)創(chuàng)造的過(guò)程。well改為much (表示非常之意)
【小題7】因?yàn)槲腋杏X(jué)我好像是個(gè)藝術(shù)家。even if即使，改為：as if(似乎，好像)
【小題8】我的第一個(gè)模特是我媽媽。First前面有my修飾了，去掉the
【小題9】在she always前面加上and，因?yàn)檫@兩句話之間是逗號(hào)，應(yīng)該加并列連詞
【小題10】總之，她以我為榮。is proud of me   (以我為傲)
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