假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文 中共有1O處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)( )，并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(　）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改1O處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Union　is strength Whenever you're faced with difficulties or in a  dilemma ,cooperation plays an important part in getting you out of trouble
There was a time when I was too proud that I  overlooked my classmate . refusing to work together with them. Therefore .it was no doubt that I was left alone . suffering from loneliness and  failure. Unfortunately a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation. From then  on ,I  learned to help others and turn to my friends for the help whenever I had difficulty finish a task  on my own. Surely cooperation made a great difference. Now I am getting well with my friend.
My experience has teach me that only if we attach  great importance with  cooperation can  we go beyond ourselves  As the saying go "United we stand ;divided we fall."


【小題1】too改成so
【小題2】classmate改成classmates
【小題3】it改成there
【小題4】Unfortunately改成fortunately
【小題5】去掉the
【小題6】finish改成finishing
【小題7】get后面加on/along
【小題8】teach改成taught
【小題9】with改成to
【小題10】go改成goes

解析試題分析：文章介紹作者一開(kāi)始很驕傲，忽略了同學(xué)，也被同學(xué)孤立，幸虧老師讓他知道合作的重要性，通過(guò)相互幫助，作者和同學(xué)相處的很好。
【小題1】我是如此驕傲，以至于忽略了同學(xué)。這里用so…that…句型：too改成so
【小題2】classmate是可數(shù)名詞，這里用復(fù)數(shù)：改成classmates
【小題3】這里考查固定句型： there is no doubt that…毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)
【小題4】老師讓他知道合作的重要性，這是幸運(yùn)的事情：Unfortunately改成fortunately
【小題5】向朋友求助，turn to sb for help，這里是泛指，去掉the
【小題6】這里考查的是固定詞組：have difficulty （in） doing“做…有困難”，finish改成finishing
【小題7】考查詞組：get on/along well with和…相處的好；get后面加on/along
【小題8】考查時(shí)態(tài)：has后面接現(xiàn)在分詞構(gòu)成現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)：teach改成taught
【小題9】考查詞組：attach importance to“重視”，with改成to
【小題10】考查主謂一致：the saying后面接動(dòng)詞的第三人稱單數(shù)：go改成goes
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)

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